Hi there
Firstly you will have to read this thread
hereand update your bio accordingly.
I would also suggest you read the deity writeupfound
here.
Your alignment chosen is NG, which is not one of the typical alignments of a cleric of Grannoch, so please change or explain in detail.
Also I would need to geta better understanding why Tankor chose to become a cleric. His grandparents would not have taught him about Grannoch at all.
I alsoneed to know who this"Daughter of Air" is and why would she care if you died in the mountains of exposure.
Thanks