RE: Melissa "Tom" Tangletoe Hi there
I can understand youreagerness to get into the world. But take 20 minutes and expand the bio a bit and more specically expand on the character. A good character with a good background will make the whole experience just much more fun.
The things she likes and dislikes, her personality and so forth. From the bioI assume that she spentquite a bit of time on the streets, so tells us a bit about that. What did she do, was she alone, did she run in a group.
Also which city did she grow up, did she have any friends? Why did she want to travel? Did she hear good stories of the big world or was something pulling her.
Just some ideas to think over.
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