[Andrios]

Hello. I think the changes add more flavor to Trance, but he still seems to me to be more of a fighter. The reason I say this is that rangers have trackless step, favored enemies, and an animal companion. These skills are intended to reflfect a deeper connection to the wilderness or other area that the ranger is connected to. This is not apparent in this biography. Could you add a bit more to reflect the connection Trance has with the wilderness? Perhaps he gained it after leaving the farm, or maybe the farm is a remote farm, and he developed the connection by all the trips he and his father made taking crops to market? Use your imagination this is a great beginning, it just needs to be developed a little bit to show that special connection/affinity that a ranger has.
Thank you for your efforts.