[cappyra]

First of all... what L said.

Now. If you are concerned about grammer and spelling in your character development, here are a couple of tips.

- Write it in MS Word or whatever you use for word processing. Spell check. Bada Bing! Cut and paste.

- Please please please please above all else... Use sentence structure and paragraphs. Spelling errors I can overlook.


As far as the story... don't just make a line for line statement of how you went to the ogre caves in Haven and bashed heads in. Add some flavor =)

Good luck =)