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orth · 05-03-06, 11:19 AM

You were absent from the world for four and a half months and therefore do not meet the time requirements we have set out. You have at least another month and a half.

With that said, I suggest you take that time to find a way to make your mark on the world. You're the first Tiefling to apply, a good suggestion might be to define your character a little more, focussing on that area. Take on some initiative, change the world for Tieflings, let her name be a symbol of hope for others who have endured the ostracizing, the challenges etc. How have the shadows helped Abi? What does being a dancer mean?

Take your time, think about it, ask yourself what makes Abigail epic, truly stand out from others who have been on the quests, what has she done alone? what will she be remembered for? what will children hear when someone talks about Abigail Ruzz/Abi?

05-03-06, 11:19 AM	#2
orth Administrator Characters Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Toronto, Ontario, Canada Posts: 3,393 Thanks: 26 Thanked 652 Times in 176 Posts	Re: Abigail Ruzz You were absent from the world for four and a half months and therefore do not meet the time requirements we have set out. You have at least another month and a half. With that said, I suggest you take that time to find a way to make your mark on the world. You're the first Tiefling to apply, a good suggestion might be to define your character a little more, focussing on that area. Take on some initiative, change the world for Tieflings, let her name be a symbol of hope for others who have endured the ostracizing, the challenges etc. How have the shadows helped Abi? What does being a dancer mean? Take your time, think about it, ask yourself what makes Abigail epic, truly stand out from others who have been on the quests, what has she done alone? what will she be remembered for? what will children hear when someone talks about Abigail Ruzz/Abi? __________________ The compiler runs Like a swift-flowing river. I wait in silence.