[IceDragonDuvessa]

You are applying for a special subrace, there needs to be far more detail as to why this subrace is integral to your character also where the celestial blood came into her family, this bio would barely be enough for a standard class and race.

Also please read through the hand book and such to get a feel for the world, a dragon attack on the villiage as a child is extremely unlikely in the realm of did not happen here.

Please give more detail on her family when they were alive as well too.

Thanks