New Character - Jamekulus Gnald

[crazedgoblin]

Full Name: Jamekulus Gnald
Age: 50
Class(es): Fighter
Race: Dwarf
Subrace: (None)
Alignment: Neutral Good
Deity: (none)
2 Domains (if cleric): (none)
Bio/Description

Jamekulus was of the numerous Gnald clan, a strong and fearless group of Dwarves who lived in the troll mountins, he set of on a trip of exploration through Mt Norand and Trielta mountins, only to be ambushed in the Trielta mountains by a group of Duergar slavers who took him far from the mountins were he was forced into mining for them, he was put to work in a gold mine collecting the metal to be sold by the Deurgar, being the only dwarf in the mine the effectiveness of the mine had increased and he seemed to be a highly valubel possesion to the slavers, one day months after being capured he managed to break his chains through his now expetional skill of metals and hacked his pick axe into his slave master's head, hr ran out into the light but when he got out he had no idea were he was, all he knew he was far from anywere he knew. He then escaped with alot of ore in a pack and retreated through the Wildlands forest.

He traveld to Gwest, were he used the ores he stole to barter for food and clothing, he stayed here for awhile makeing a small living as a lumberjack, until one day while in a bar he saw three hooded figures enter the bar, their aversion to light and their height gave them away almost immediatly he knew they were comeing for him, one pulled out a parchement which had a picture on it pointed toward the dwarf, with axes drawn they advanced through the bar, he pulled a woodaxe off his belt and threw it at one of the figures who he know knew to be Deurgar slavers one fell to the floor, he lifted a chair and brought it down on the other slaver chargeing at him, kicked away the third grabbing a Great axe of the wall which he then brought it to rest beetween the slavers ribs which from the force shatterd the thin wooden wall of the inn, on the way out he picked up the parchement and had a quick look, this was from high in the deurgar but nothing on it why they wanted him. Jamekulus was then chased out of town by the guards so he ran to north point and used the last of his gold to travel across the sea to Liken.

There he stops for a drink at a bar but more Deurgar are waiting for him, he fights off 3 of them but then they pick up a small child and threaton to kill it, the goodness in his heart would not allow the child to be hurt, he handed himself over to the Deurgar, instead of recieveing a slave collar he was stabbed by a blade but before they could mortaly wound him, the city guards interveend, the Deurgar were chased off, Jamekulus was taken taken to the temple for healing and while recovering he had a vision...

[aragwen]

Hi there, this is a good start but here is a couple of questions that I need to have explained please:
- After he escaped from the Duergar, why not return to his clan? - The duergar salvers tracking him to Gwest? Why would they go through all that trouble and risk being killed by entering a town? Why not just find another slave? - The same goes for meeting duergar in Liken? - Lastly when he dies he gets pulled by the dragon to Hlint. That is unlikely as the dragon would not have that type of power of the dead. Would work better if you were brought back by a passing cleric or was left for dead but not quite. During your recovery you could have the visions of the dragon and then go to Hlint yourself.
Thanks

[crazedgoblin]

ok i have coverd the points

[aragwen]

You indeed did cover my last question/comment, but my other questions/comments are still unanswered.
Please think them through and apply it to your character.
Thanks

[crazedgoblin]

i have added why he could not go back and why the Deurgar valued him so much

[aragwen]

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