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01-31-06, 08:53 AM
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#1 | | Red Light Goblin Join Date: Jan 2006
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|  Omni Impel - submission
Full Name: Omni Impel
Age: 18
Class(es): Sorceror
Race: Human
Alignment: True Neutral
Deity: Lucinda
Bio/Description:
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In a small human civilization outside of Faroth...
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There is a small sign posted outside of a wooden structure called "The Sorceror's Guild"
It reads:
ATTENTION ALL TRAVELERS:
We, at the sorceror's guild, are in search of a young man. He is tall and lean, with short dark brown hair. He has blue-grey eyes and a dark complexion. He was last seen in the center of the village, wearing a dark blue robe and carrying a journey pack.
It was discovered this morning, that the young man left without our authority or consent, and may be trying to leave the village. We do not normally keep people in our presence against their will, but this young elf has a strong will and seems to us that without proper training his skills will get out of hand and become a problem for the world. He has shown an unusual gift in his very quick learning of our magical skills, and on top of this he has been caught reading spellbooks and working with magic by himself. He is not considered dangerous, by any means, but we feel that our guidance is the only way we can be sure he will not become dangerous eventually. We have not seen someone pick up skills and techniques this quickly before, and once again we fear it may get out of control one day.
A few more facts about the young elf: His mother is deceased, but was once a well-known spellcaster. His father is a fighter in the militia that holds Faroth. He has no other siblings. He may once in a while be heard murmuring to Lucinda, who he worships, and may also be heard talking to himself about his mother and father.
Please report any information to Maligar at the Sorceror's Guild.
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Somewhere in eastern Wolfswood Forest...
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Omni kneels down next to a fallen tree catching his breath... "Why do they want to keep me there so badly?", he ponders. "I did nothing wrong, in fact, I did everything they asked of me, and learned what they taught me"... "I just wanted to learn some of the magic my mother knew so well without them hinduring me." "Those mentors were trying to hold me back, I believe... I need freedom to learn on my own..". "Oh well, I am gone now, for good... I think I can handle myself just fine in the real world" ... WHOOSH, a goblin's arrow stirs the air in front of Omni's face. "Not again!", Omni closes his eyes and murmurs a quick prayer to Lucinda and runs off through the trees, leaving the gibbering goblin behind.
NOTE: Omni was taught the ways of Lucinda by his mother when he was a young boy. As normal mothers told their children bedtime stories, Omni's mother read to him spells from spellbooks and notes from books about Lucinda and The Weave. He was taught the days of celebration of Lucindites as well. He full believes in The Weave and all that Lucinda stands for.
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01-31-06, 04:39 PM
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#2 | | Beholder Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Beavercreek, Ohio
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| Re: Omnipotent Impel - submission
Hello!
I am not trying to be a pain, but I have several concerns about this character.
1) A lawfull character would stay at the temple, or monks guild, until he got the ok from his superiors to leave. For him to leave early, there would have to be some form of corruption in the temple. Then if he left it would probably be to report the temple to whatever authorities he deemed appropriate.
2) It strongly sounds like you intend for this character to work on mage and monk levels at the same time. Monk is a special class, much like Paladin, and once you leave it you can not return to it. So you would have to take 11 (or however many monk levels, but at least 5) and then switch to wizard class. At least with the bio as it stands now. I want to make sure you are aware of that.
3)I mean no disrespect by this at all, but I can not approve a character named Omnipotent. Omni is ok if you wanted to go with that.
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02-01-06, 07:22 AM
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#3 | | Red Light Goblin Join Date: Jan 2006
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| Re: Omni Impel - submission
Total edited it, it is much different, approval for this guy?  | | | | |
02-01-06, 09:06 AM
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#4 | | Lich Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Fort Mill, South Carolina
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| Re: Omni Impel - submission
Hehe, kind of enjoyed this version. Very nice, thanks for your cooperation.
Approved!
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02-01-06, 06:25 PM
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#5 | | Red Light Goblin Join Date: Jan 2006
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| Re: Omni Impel - submission
I have edited this to make it a human, please make sure it is still approved | | | | | Thread Tools | | | | Display Modes |  Linear Mode | 
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