Kroeger character submission.Please read this

Vlassus · 02-05-06, 05:33 AM

Name:Kroeger
Age:21
Clas:fighter
Race:human
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alignement:chaotic good
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Bio:At his birth kroeger was left at a small monastery.Growing up with these monks he always had a nag to be a rebel so he ran away at 16 years of age. Not knowing what to do he soon got lost in the cold snow and almost died of starvation. This was when a man came by and taked him to his house.He explained his situation to the man and told him he wanted to be a warrior.The man once a warrior a long time ago agreed to train him but he had to do him a favior.
Agrreing to his terms he was trained for 3 years.After this the man called Gregory said to him"You are ready but theres is one thing you most know..."Unfortunaly he couldnt finish the sentence cause arrows littered the skies and he was pierced by many.
At this moment orcs rushed in to finish the job but they didnt count on kroeger.Defending his mentor with all he got,but the orcs where too many so he fell to the ground and was left to the mercy of his assailant.At this time gregory Although he was badly wounded he charged at the orcs killingf many.The orcs demoralized retreated.Falling to the floor he asked Kroeger to come closer.he said"Kroeger do you know your parents?""no"answered Kroeger"wel take a good look at me cause i am your father"And with this he left this realm and joined his ancestors.Rage overtook kroeger and he gathered his stuff and set out to find the person who tryed to kill his father and maybe find news about his mother.

This is a description of how he looks:Tall and long brown hair he grew a beard because Gregory once told him"you can gues a mans courage to the size of his beard you can ask the dwarfs" Green eyes decorate his visage other then the scars of battles our stupid accidents.He is muscular build from long and hard training in cold temperature.If the name is taken il just pick anither one ok.

Andrios · 02-05-06, 05:47 PM

Hello!
I just have a few questions about this bio.
1) What was the favor that Kroeger had to do in order to be trained by Gregory?
2) Is Kroeger's rage focused on the orcs, or does he feel/suspect someone else was behind it?
3) Does he have any clues about his mother?
These are questions that this interesting biography brought to my mind.
Thanks

Vlassus · 02-06-06, 06:39 AM

Frist the favor is something he has to find out but it was about him defeating his father in combat thus giving him a worthy death.(He wasnt a good man in his time so ha wanted to be punished) Second his rage is about his fathers death by the hand of an unknown character.So he wants to destroy this man our thing.And third no he has no cleus about tha whereabouts of his mother but this wont stop him from searching.

Andrios · 02-06-06, 10:24 AM

Ok. so Kroeger does not know the favor that was to be asked of him because his father died before being able to ask it. Kroeger also believes that someone was behind the orc attacks, and he has no clue to his mothers identity. Thank you for clearing that up.

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