Shi'nayne DeVir (submission 2)

[Warcrow]

Shi'nayne DeVir (female)
18
fighter
half-elf (Drow)
neutral good

This story begins with a female elf named Nathrae Northstar and her husband Vdayan they lived inthe elf village of Tir na Nog. They were average people who worked hard Vdayan was a blacksmith and Nathrae was a tailor. One late evening the village was attacked by Lord Azirag DeVir a Drow and a small band of his men Vdayan was killed and Nathrae and several other women taken prisioner back to his castle. Lord DeVir to a fancey to Nathrae and even though she resisted him he raped and made her a servent of his sister Drada.Drada was was with a child to be and Nathrae was unknowingly pregant.When Drada's child was born dead she made a deal with nathrae to let her child lived as hers if she would tell no one.So the child was born (Shi'nayne) she was raised as a Drow and taught their ways.But on Drada's death bed she told Shi the true story and so she went to Nathrae and talked about their real family and things she should know.Now Shi has ran of to seek help to free her real mother and learn of the real world and what others are really like not what she was taught as a Drow.
When Shi was born she was taken by Drada as being HER child, all female children of mixed blood are put to death and the male children are castrated and trained to be soilders of the Draw this is to proserve the pure blood lines of the Drow. Shi was raised up by a loving mother (Drada) and her husband (father) Drotutha,who having no sons raised Shi who was a natural born tom boy taught her the ways of nature and the art of the sword.By the time she was 9 she could use a sword far better than most male children her age.She was taught that all other races were gready vicious people and that the other race hunted them because they were gready and wanted their lands for its beauty and riches. Shi was also taught a few different lanagues by the different races of slaves her people had.But she would often slip out at night and go down near the slave quarters and listen to the stories they would tell and the music and songs they sung.When Drada died Shi was 15,and she found out that Nathrae was her blood mother she would sneek and spend hours listing to her speek of the outside world.And even though she was raised in the Drow world she had just enough Elf blood flowing through her veins and in her heart to have compasion for others. Shi studied in all things that would make her wise and trained harder in becoming a master of the sword and planed for the day she would excape and return for her mother.Shi'nayne is 18 now and slowly turning into a beautiful young woman she stands 5ft 4inches tall and has the skin traits of a Drow being a bluish gray in color with long white silky hair. So now Shi'nayne must enter the world of others to decide what is right for her, that will depend on how she is treated good or bad will she be scorned for having the blood and looks of a Drow or will she be accepted as an Elf, time will tell. Shi'nayne is true neutral so she may choose what she finds in this new world to be right or wromg.

[Leanthar]

If you wish to be a drow we need a long description (well, even a half-drow). I also need to know your real alignment, not just good.

I need to know more about your life and how it was growing up etc. A 1/2 drow is okay, we just need a lot more information that normal.

[Leanthar]

I see you have edited your submision but you did not change your alignment as request, that needs to happen. When you change that and/or when you edit things make sure you bump the thread so we know when it has been edited.

[Warcrow]

I hope this is what you need Rav

[Leanthar]

Not quite: You stated:

Shi'nayne DeVir (female)
18
fighter
half-elf (Drow)
good


Good is not an alignment, are you wanting Chaotic Good (CG), Lawful Good (LG), or Neutral Good (NG). Please see the alignments thread in this forum.

[Warcrow]

sorry i changed it futher down but didn't at the begining

[Leanthar]

Thank you for your patience and working with me.

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