Character Submission: Renji (**Resubmission for PrC/CDQ**) 2nd submit

Sudoku · 02-11-06, 02:56 PM

Full Name: Renji Sudoku Age: 24 Class(es): Ranger (Hopefully more!) Race: Human Subrace: None Alignment: Neutral/Neutral Deity: Branderback Domains (if cleric):None Short Bio/Description: It was a warm afternoon, people were shoulder to shoulder spending their time loitering the marketplace. The wind carried on it the smell of fresh breads and ripe fruits... Ripe for the picking. A grumble from Renji's stomach brought him back to his feet. His deep green eyes peered through his dark unwashed hair. Garbbed in tattered clothes he shuffled through the crowd. Moving between legs and ducking under tables Renji was confident for his age. Only a few short months after his tenth birthday was he venturing to the marketplace alone. Baerven was a fine teacher indeed and Renji admired him. His thoughts were scattered. Faint images in his minds eye remind him of his teachings and his past. Renji had known Baerven all his life and considered him his father. Baerven was a beggar, old and wise. Once a devoted cleric of Branderback untill his exile. He had raised Renji on the streets since he had been abandoned at a very young age. He had shared all his knowledge, wisdom, and faith hoping for the day Renji would live life to the fullest. Focusing now, Renji targeted his mark. His hands at his side, he clenched his fists then relaxed. It was all too easy... Many years have passed since Baervan left this world. Renji peered off into the distance, his hair much longer now. Only Baerven's teachings and faith in Branderback keep him going. The world awaits him, ripe for the taking.

Leanthar · 02-11-06, 03:03 PM

Approved. Welcome to Layonara.

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Sudoku · 02-15-06, 12:03 PM

Full Name: Renji Sudoku
Age: 24
Class(es): Ranger/ShadowDancer (**Updated**)
Race: Human
Subrace: None
Alignment: Neutral/Neutral
Deity: Branderback
Domains (if cleric): None

**Updated Bio & Character Development**:

http://www.layonaraonline.com/forums...osts=3&start=1

**I have contacted DM Andrios regarding the situation. I sent him a descriptive and detailed outline for my characters development in Layonara. Following Andrios' prerequisites for a CDQ, I am posting my updated bio and character developments. Since Andrios recieved a PM of my character's outline, I feel it unneccesary to post it here. If any DMs require this info please don't hesitate to contact me.**

aragwen · 02-17-06, 12:56 AM

Hi there
I have you read your development thread and nothing in it indicates why he should start following the shadowdancers' path.
You will have to RP your character a while longer and continue to maintain a development thread, but more importantly this thread need to show why your character decides to follow the path of shadowdancing.
Furthermore how does your character even know of shadowdancing? Did he have an experience with one that lead him to inquire more about this? Your character cant just wake up one morning and decide he wants to be a shadowdancer. I hope that makes sense what I am trying to say.
At this time the request is denied, but please continue to RP and keep your development thread going and resubmit when you feel the time is right.
Thanks Aragwen

Sudoku · 03-11-06, 05:47 PM

Hello to Aragwen and all other DMs/GMs,

I thought i would post here and give an update to some things that have happened to Renji since my first request for Shadow Dancer as a multiclass. From the above mentioned comments from Aragwen, Renji has roleplayed extensively as of late and his dev thread reflects these happenings quite well. I hope there is enough there to warrant an approval, not that i just want the shadow dancer class so bad, just that i think alot has been learned and roleplayed over the last few weeks. I hope some of this helps and i'll include the link to the dev thread for ease of use. Thanks again and i look forward to any more comments and suggestions you can give. Thanks!

http://www.layonaraonline.com/forums...osts=9&start=1

~Renji~

Leanthar · 03-12-06, 05:18 AM

Your character is only level 3 right? Please wait until at least 7th level before going to a PrC. Not required but it is preferable. You need to have a very good reason to do it before at least 5th level.

Sudoku · 03-12-06, 06:37 AM

'Renji' is currently level 10, almost level 11. My first attempt was 'Renji Sudoku' whom I spent the first 3 and only levels in rogue instead of the ranger class like I wanted. I have not sent a request for 'Renji Sudoku' to be deleted, therefore both 'Renji' and 'Renji Sudoku' both appear in the login for layonara. I can submit a request for 'Renji Sudoku', the lvl 3 rogue, to be deleted from the server vault if that will fix any confusion on the matter. I hope this clears things up a bit, I did not anticipate the lack of the original character deletion causing problems down the line. Anyways, thanks for replying as fast as you did on my 2nd submission. Thanks again!

~Renji~

Leanthar · 03-12-06, 06:52 AM

Aww okay, well then your request is approved with your dev threads. Though it is not required I would suggest you request a CDQ to move in to the shadow dancer prc.

Sudoku · 03-12-06, 06:56 AM

Awesome, I will inform Andrios that we are a 'go' on the CDQ. Thanks Leanthar, you da man!

Andrios · 04-11-06, 04:06 AM

Renji has successfully completed his cdq and may begin taking levels as a shadow dancer.