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Old 04-01-06, 06:58 AM #1
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Default Submission: Boon Loom

Full Name: Boon Loom
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Class(es): Initial submission fighter. (the future plan for him is: Fighter 8 / Weapon Master 7 / Rouge 5)
Deity: None
Alignment: TN

Appearance: This verry well trained warrior is born to fight. He is normal size for a human but the way he move and the look in his eyes tells you that his fighting skills is probably far from normal.

Bio: Boon Loom was born in the main capital of Druegar, Pranzis. His father was an fighter, and so was his father. From the early age of five years old, he started to train to become the greatest fighter the world have ever seen. His father was an weapon master whith the skill to kill almost any enemy in one single strike. Noob looked up to his father and trained hard every day seven days a week to become as good as him. But whith age and further prowess he took another path from what his father wan'ted him too.. He decided to become an dual wielding fighter.

His father was old school and just shaked his head and muttered at first. But after a few years when Boon started to get the hang of it, he realized that Boon had made the right choice.

Boon become a little bit fameous in Pranzis for his dual wielding skills and he often travelled to Fort valensk Arena to fight against other fighters at his age.. sometimes he would win. And sometimes he would loose.

At this time he understoud that if he was going to be the best of them all he must become one whith his swords and in the end become an Weapon Master as his father.

So when Boon become 20 years old and just returned home from the Contest of arms at Fort Valensk he told his father that he must seek the true Path to become an dual wielding weapon master and therefor he had to go out in the world and Search for his inner Ki. His father understood that this day would come and couldn't do anything else but wish his soon good luck and Hope that he would come home alive some day..

Boon Loom packed his bags and his swords and set sailed to Mistone..

Boon Loom is a simple man with simple needs. he belives that if he get to be an weapon master, others will show him respect and he will feel pleased with himself. He don't worship any gods because he thinks that true strenght comes whithin your skills and your own confidence. Not from any help from a god that you pray too. He know that he was born to be a warrior and that the time will come when he will be facing his destany and become the greatest weapon master of them all.. (at least thats what he thinks)
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Old 04-03-06, 12:06 AM #2
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Default Re: Submission: Noob Loom

We do not approve prestige classes at initial submission.

I see no reason in the bio for this character to be a rogue.

Please change his fist name.
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Old 04-03-06, 12:31 AM #3
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Default Re: Submission: Noob Loom

I know that you don't approv prestige classes at initial submission. But i wan'ted to show that thats the path he wan't to go. So this is realy just a submission for the first 8 fighters lvls. i just wan'ted to show what I had in mind for him later on. Same goes for the rouge lvls. this might change and maybe he will go back for fighter lvls after the weaponmaster training or maybe he will chose another path and starting to take wizards lvls. This is something that time will tell and depending on how my character will prowess and wich path that makes most sence to him. Of course I will write in the character development thread how and why when the times come.

So the initial submission in that case will be fighter 20 lvls.

Then the name thing. I realy like the name. it has a nice flow that I can't get out of my head. Please tell me the reason why you wan't me to change it. If the reason is that noob can have another meaning, I can think of tons of names that have that..

Thanks for reconsider the choise of his name



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Old 04-03-06, 12:41 AM #4
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Default Re: Submission: Noob Loom

Approved as fighter only pending the name change.
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Old 04-03-06, 04:48 AM #5
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Default Re: Submission: Noob Loom

Ok thanks.

If Noob Loom isn't approved I could go for Doom Loom. But then again, thats maybe not approved because of the game name Doom. *shrugs*

So maybe Moon Loom. Or is that a bit girly? I realy wan't to keep Loom and still wan't to have that nice flow

Waiting for your decission..
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Old 04-05-06, 05:20 AM #6
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Default Re: Submission: Noob Loom

I have decided that if not Noob Loom is approved i will go for the name Boon Loom. Not as good as Noob.. but I think I can live with it..
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approved as boon
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Old 04-05-06, 10:43 PM #8
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Ok.. thanks
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Old 04-15-06, 01:44 AM #9
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Default Re: Submission: Boon Loom

Full Name: Boon Loom
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Class(es): Initial submission fighter. (the future plan for him is: Fighter 8 / Weapon Master 7 / Rouge 5)
Deity: None
Alignment: TN

Appearance: This verry well trained warrior is born to fight. He is normal size for a human but the way he move and the look in his eyes tells you that his fighting skills is probably far from normal.

Bio: Boon Loom was born in the main capital of Druegar, Pranzis. His father was an fighter, and so was his father. From the early age of five years old, he started to train to become the greatest fighter the world have ever seen. His father was an weapon master whith the skill to kill almost any enemy in one single strike. Boon looked up to his father and trained hard every day seven days a week to become as good as him. Boons younger brother Voon wasn't born to be a fighter. their father was verry struct and when they trained together Boon sometimes let Voon win. But their father niteced that and just punished both of them. Boon could see that voon hated the training and he tried to help him as much as he could. But one day when Boon woke up his brother was gone.. boon cried and wanted to go and find him. But his father said that he would come back and put Boon in an military tranining camp so he couldn't leave too. for 8 long years boon was stuck in the military school. He learned everything about warfare and his skill prwess as he grew older. But whith age and further prowess he took another path from what his father wan'ted him too.. He decided to become an dual wielding fighter.

His father was old school and just shaked his head and muttered at first. But after a few years when Boon started to get the hang of it, he realized that Boon had made the right choice.

Boon become a little bit fameous in Pranzis for his dual wielding skills and he often travelled to Fort valensk Arena to fight against other fighters at his age.. sometimes he would win. And sometimes he would loose.

At this time he understoud that if he was going to be the best of them all he must become one whith his swords and in the end become an Weapon Master as his father.

So when Boon become 20 years old and just returned home from the Contest of arms at Fort Valensk he told his father that he must seek the true Path to become an dual wielding weapon master and therefor he had to go out in the world and Search for his inner Ki. He also had almost geven up hope that his brother would still be alive, but he was determined that he atlest would find out what had happened to him since he left. His father understood that this day would come and couldn't do anything else but wish his soon good luck and Hope that he would come home alive some day..

Boon Loom packed his bags and his swords and set sailed to Mistone..

Boon Loom is a simple man with simple needs. he belives that if he get to be an weapon master, others will show him respect and he will feel pleased with himself. He don't worship any gods because he thinks that true strenght comes whithin your skills and your own confidence. Not from any help from a god that you pray too. He know that he was born to be a warrior and that the time will come when he will be facing his destany and become the greatest weapon master of them all.. (at least thats what he thinks)

//I have uppdated the Bio a bit so it now includes Boons brother Voon Other from that its the same..
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Default Re: Submission: Boon Loom

the update to include the bio is fine. Thanks for posting.
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