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Old 04-13-06, 02:54 AM #1
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Full Name: Rizzen Fallingstar Age: 18 Class(es): Rogue/Fighter (advancement goals: 6/6 -> 20/6 -> 20/1 Race: Human Subrace: Tiefling Alignment: Chaotic Good Deity: Goran Bio/Description: I used to be a human... I thought I am a human... until my 18th birthday or maybe “birthnight”. But... let’s us start from the very beginning. I was born 18 years ago at City of Krandor. My pure mother (Adria Fallingstar) died just after my first deep breath ever. She was first person I cried after. First tears... first death... first unaware greed of revenge. The greed which blown up yesterday. My father (Daltimor Fallingstar) used to be a First Cleric of Goran Chapel at Krandor. I write used to be, because first of all he is an inventor and engineer. But isn’t it the same? He specializes himself at security devices. Whole house was full of it; every door is locked with brand new “thievery proof lock”, every window is protected with “alarm-glass” or “stone’n’hammer proof glass” and so on. He found a substitute of my mother. Work! But still he has time for me... and to be honest I am his most precious and only treasure for him. So he brought me carefully and with love. He gave me his values, his Deity and his love to devices. After I had reached age of seven, my father decide to starts my education and preparation for a Goran Novice. But half of my blood wants to “open and disable” not to “pray and meditate”. Fortunately Daltimor notice it and didn’t force me to become a cleric. He always talk to me: Your path is your decision, but be aware, straight and easy paths not always are better than narrow and winding one. The path of cleric definitely wasn’t my way. But still I have been attending his lessons with pleasure It proves lately that it was a good choice.. I learned quickly and showed great talent at technical matters. At age of 12 I become my father’s apprentice and first tester. That was me who gives him hints how to avoid his inventions and he used this hints to improve them. I have to learn how to sneak to avoid his optical devices, move silently to avoid other alarms and so on. Mutual benefits. I was doing what I like he become the best security staff supplier at our region. And not only. From time to time we are visited by some foreign, dark-skin strangers, or even Barons or Princes. And that how my life looks until that fatal night. The night of pain and suffer. The night when my body changes to reveal its secret. Two horns pierce my skull and grown in one hour. A tail... I cannot believe it... it appears out of nowhere. My eyes became totally black and I lost my sight for a moment but when I get it back I realize that through tears I could see without source of light. You cannot imagine how painful it was. Ii was not only physical pain but most of all mental. I am TIEFLING... lesser demon. I am not the one I think I am. Dear God! My world collapsed. And what about my father? How should I call a man who took care about me whole night, and life. I looked at him at voicelessly asked... It was difficult for him... now I know why. I know why he never mentioned about my mother and his wife. It happened 19 years ago. There was a huge ride at our city. Lots of people were killed, lots of them where missing... One of missing ones was my future mother. No-one knows what happens to her. But my father believes. He hired some rangers and started chasing kidnapers. After two months he catch them. The Slavers. There wasn’t my mother with them. They sold her to a mad wizard day before. And it was to late. When my father with his company break into wizard tower the demon was summoned, wizard was eaten and my mother rapped. Mad people always make mistakes and demons never prize humans... especially clerics with banish spell. My poor mother had lost her mind after it. And my father never told anyone that her pregnancy wasn’t his job. Sad but it preserves her honor. And that is my story... now I have to move... no-one could notice my change. It will be better for my father. I have to move and find Belloar... strange but now I know his name. It always has been at my mind... last words of my dying mother. Kill Belloar son for everything he had done to three of us.
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Default Re: my first character: Rizzen Fallingstar

Tieflings often have only one show of thier lineage. We do not approve wings and very rarely tails. You have his father as a demon. This relation is too close to be approved as it effectivey makes him a half demon which is considerably more powerful than a tiefling. Also please show why the rogue/fighter split. Thank you.
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Old 04-13-06, 11:01 PM #3
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Full Name: Rizzen Fallingstar Age: 18 Class(es): Rogue/Fighter (advancement goals: 6/6 -> 20/6 -> 20/1 Race: Human Subrace: Tiefling Alignment: Chaotic Good Deity: Goran Bio/Description: I used to be a human… I thought I am a human… until my 18th birthday or maybe “birthnight”. But… let’s us start from the very beginning. I was born 18 years ago at City of Krandor. My pure mother (Adria Fallingstar) died just after my first deep breath ever. She was first person I cried after. First tears… first death… first unaware greed of revenge. The greed which blown up yesterday. My father (Daltimor Fallingstar) used to be a First Cleric of Goran Chapel at Krandor. I write used to be, because first of all he is an inventor and engineer. But isn’t it the same? He specializes himself at security devices. Whole house was full of it; every door is locked with brand new “thievery proof lock”, every window is protected with “alarm-glass” or “stone’n’hammer proof glass” and so on. He found a substitute of my mother. Work! But still he has time for me… and to be honest I am his most precious and only treasure for him. So he brought me carefully and with love. He gave me his values, his Deity and his love to devices. After I had reached age of seven, my father decide to starts my education and preparation for a Goran Novice. But half of my blood wants to “open and disable” not to “pray and meditate”. Fortunately Daltimor notice it and didn’t force me to become a cleric. He always talk to me: Your path is your decision, but be aware, straight and easy paths not always are better than narrow and winding one. The path of cleric definitely wasn’t my way. But still I have been attending his lessons with pleasure It proves lately that it was a good choice.. I learned quickly and showed great talent at technical matters. At age of 12 I become my father’s apprentice and first tester. That was me who gives him hints how to avoid his inventions and he used this hints to improve them. I have to learn how to sneak to avoid his optical devices, move silently to avoid other alarms and so on. Mutual benefits. I was doing what I like he become the best security staff supplier at our region. And not only. From time to time we are visited by some foreign, dark-skin strangers, or even Barons or Princes. And that how my life looks until that fatal night. The night of pain and suffer. The night when my body changes to reveal its secret. Two horns pierce my skull andgrew in one hour. My eyes became totally black and I lost my sight for a moment but when I get it back I realize that through tears I could see without source of light. You cannot imagine how painful it was. Ii was not only physical pain but most of all mental. I am TIEFLING… lesser demon. I am not the one I think I am. Dear God! My world collapsed. And what about my father? How should I call a man who took care about me whole night, and life. I looked at him at voicelessly asked… It was difficult for him… now I know why. I know why he never mentioned about my mother and his wife. It happened 19 years ago. There was a huge ride at our city. Lots of people were killed, lots of them where missing… One of missings was my future mother. No-one knows what happens to her. But my father believes. He hired some rangers and started chasing kidnapers. After two months he catch them. The Slavers. There wasn’t my mother with them. They sold her to some wizard day before. When my father with his company break into wizard tower it had been to late. She was rapped... but still alive. He was standing next to her and laughing. His big red wings were waving. He was half demon sothe fight was short... One word and my father party was holded. Insted of killing them he started playing and torturing. Mad people always make mistakes and demonslike never prize humans… especially clerics with banish spell and casting without gesture ability... Strange but now I know his name. It always has been in my mind… last words of my dying mother: Kill Belloar son for everything he had done to three of us. My poor mother had lost her mind after it. And my father never told anyone that her pregnancy wasn’t his job. Sad but it preserves her honor. And that is my story… now I have to move… no-one could notice my change. It will be better for my father. But how will I deal with crude world outside city walls?? We decided that i have to learn how to fight. My father cannot give me this ability but his brother (Sir Ghunthar Fallingstar) can. He is Scouts Regiment Captain at Fort Llast and army allways is looking for fresh meat. My father gave me a letter to him, couple of coins and blessing... THE JOURNEY BEGINS __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________ I change demon summoned by a wizardto halfdemon wizard to be honest i forgot that tieflinghas only1/4 demonic blood. Also i give Rizzen destination of his escape from Krandor and finaly resign from a tail...
Rogue/fighter split: Rizzen cannot fight with its heritage... He is tiefling and naturalborn rogue. It proves that even his father cannot push him into another way and make him a Cleric. But after revealing a truth about his origin, he has torun awaythe city. The only shelter is his uncle Ghunthar. This situation changed Rizzen's mind. He has to find balance between his natural predispositions and need of times. He is brought up in respect of other property so he cannot become a ordinary thief, but of course u cannot fight with nature... Becoming a Scout Squad member gives him a chance to achieve the balance. I imagine that after he joins an army he will get (besides scout's training) basic military training ... it is normal procedure thats why first advancement goal is R6/F6. Then he will masterise his scout abilities (R20/F6). and than he will start thinking about his martial abilities because of Belloar (R20/F1. I plan some CDQ's to get all of it... first one is the way to Fort Llast the last one is Killing Balloar at Planes. Between this brackets i plane some "Military Matters" CDQ's So if You decide to accept my story i probably have to ask DM for creating Ghunthar at Fort Last, but first i have tocheck how Layonara looks like and how all of it works.
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Old 04-14-06, 06:55 AM #4
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According to Faterchaos request for dragon and infernal ear i want to ask for 3 additional languages: dwarven, elven and orcish except three i will have automaticly due my race (common infernal abyssal)
i will haveint 16 (including subrace bonus)so that means+3
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Default Re: my first character: Rizzen Fallingstar

If you want languages at creation they need to be detailed within you bio. I don't see a reason why the character would know anything other than common. Infernal/abyssal are not automatically granted to tieflings and he was raised by humans. Dragon ear is almost unheard of on Layonara as there are almost no dragons left. I would approve this bio with no bonus languages or you can detail the rigorous learning of the languages.
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ok no prob... just ask because of the thread i mentioned above. no languages. does it mean that my character is aproved?
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Yup, with no languages. I just wanted to give you a chance at altering to include language infor before moving the submission.

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