Character Resubmission: REVISED Tahl-rah

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Name: Tahl-rah Race: WildElf Sex: Male Class: Ranger/Fighter/Rogue Deity: Kithairien Alignment:Lawful Neutral The clan Auvrea-anea, meaning Blood of the Night, was located in the deep forests of Xantril. The clan was a nomadic group of Wild Elves, all of which studied stealth, survival skills and blade skills. They honed their fighting skills and decided to settle in an enclosed area, where they started their villiage. These elves were different than most wild elves, they were more civil and knew of what they must do in order for their clan to succeed. Auvrea-anea was started out as a group that was composed of mercenaries, strong and for hire. The members of this group trained continously and formed a strong base of the clan. Tahl-rah is the grandson of one of the main founders of the clan. Tahl-rah was trained as a tool from birth and carried out missions for other countries, which would bring the clan money and respect. Tahl-rah trained from when he was 13 until he reached being able to hide quite well at 75. A mission was set for Tahl-rah to sneak into another country's land and steal important scrolls for the rivaling country. This was the biggest mission Tahl-rah had been on, he knew he couldn't mess this one up or he will be looked down upon by his elders. Tahl-rah was successful all the way until he reached his client's country where he was met by the country's guards. The guards took the scrolls from him and led him into a room. He was then beaten from behind by the guards with clubs and holding magic. The General of the country's forces came out from a door and told him that his clan's villiage had been burned down along with it's members. He told Tahl-rah, "You will never be powerful by playing the middle man like your clan does." "This was all a set-up by our neighboring country." "We could kill you now, but that would be too easy on you..." "....we'll let you suffer knowing you could not help your clan!" Tahl-rah went into a frenzy, his blood boiled and his veins popped out of his skin. "What have you done!!", Tahl-rah screamed. "Shut-up!" the General yelled as he slammed Tahl-rah's head into the wall. Tahl-rah stumbled with his hands tied behind his back and blacked out. Tahl-rah woke up in the woods with his head throbbing. Tahl-rah made his way to his villiage frantically, he could smell blood and smoke in the air. He tried to ignore these facts and kept on towards his villiage. When he got to eye-site of the village, he knew they weren't bluffing. They had left no bodies, instead he saw a pile of smoldering ash. Not knowing what he is capable of, Tahl-rah began to seek power on an enlightened path. He had overheard adventurers talk about a place called Layonara and decided to head that way.

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This character is going to have to be totally redone as I don't think you can fit any alignment in that we allow for beginning players. Not to mention we would not accept a Level 1 being able to slay a General and two of his guards with a quick flick of his wrist after having his head smashed.

Denied unless some serious changed are considered.

[Evolution_Flash]

i have made some changes in this character, instead of taking out the guards he now is taken out by the general with the whole slam head against the wall thing....(only a 75 year old elf with only stealth skills and still weak) so now he is on Lawful Neutral alignment as well, wich i had to decide to do so i didn't just throw this char away. He is now im guessing very suitable to start his path as he will only begin to level as a ranger and training at Layonara.

[Leanthar]

The only concern I have is this.. Change your age to at least 90 (an elf of the proper age for adventuring). The other concern is it would not be a country as you stated, but it could be a territory or county as it is referred to many times. RP it as a county or territory and the age is 90 and this is approved.

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