Aylse Lu'aria

[Zelda1]

Full Name: Aylse Lu'aria
Age: 20
Class(es): Cleric
Race: Human
Alignment: chaotic good
Deity: Xeen
2 Domains (if cleric): plants and water
Bio/Description:
Alyse was born Oclar 7, 1388 in Point Harbor. Aylse is from a very small family: her mother, Yiaka, and herself. Alyse's father died only a year after she was born. Her mother's family shunned her because of Yiaka's faith in Xeen. And her father had no family that they knew of. Yiaka and Aylse lived in a hut in Point Harbor and sewed to make money for food and clothes. Aylse is a very fast learner; she became far better than her mother at tailoring in just a few years, but Alyse worked her tiny fingers to the bone. It all paid off to hear the stories of a mysterious Mistress of Pleasure and Pain before bed and take a bath and pray with her mother in the morning. At a very young age of 14, Yiaka was assainated by a gang that Aylse's father had been involved in and owed money too. They had finally found her after all those years. Aylse ran in her favorite pink dress toward Karthy for the temple of Xeen. She had only been there a few times for the Night of Flesh and Magic.. but as long as she followed the vine-like pattern of stars that her mother had told her was Xeen's Gift, Aylse knew that she would be fine. It took but a few hours for her to reach Karthy, but thankfully, when she arrived the clerics at the temple welcomed her with open arms. They knew she had an affection for pleasure and wine from the letters they often had gotten from Yiaka, and they could smell it on her breath. Aylse is happy there. She can bathe every morning and pray with the priests and priestesses as she had done for as long as she can remember. As well as tend to the grapes and sew with her feet in the ocean. She loves to help plan parties and festivals to celebrate various things. Although she doesn't know much in the ways of battle, other than using a whip for a few fighting techniques, but she is always willing to learn. She waters the grapes everyday... and sends the men into a whirling spiral of pleasure with just a look in the eye.
Aylse has slighly tanned skin from her days watering the grapes and sewing near the sea. She has medium black hair that she often keeps up in a bun. Alyse is about average height for an elf, but is incredibly small around the waist.

1. I have read the rules and understood the rules and avalible information on Xeen and will do my very best to RP a cleric of Xeen to my best ability.

2. Aylse's way of dedication to Xeen is to sew fine tailored items and plan parties to honor the Mistress of Pleasure and Pain. She knows it is very important to have fun and live life to the fullest it can be and tries to do so everyday. She likes to stay in big cites and dress formally everyday.

3. For years Aylse has been perfecting wine and learning to use a whip. She has never worn metal in her entire life and does not wish to do so. For it is too cumbersome, and she is too frail. This is a way of proving to Xeen that she is worthy of her greatness, as well as her pleasure.

[Reventage]

For me the bio sounds a bit like that of a humans. I find it unlikely that a gang would harbour hatred for eighty years, even if there was an elf leading it. I would ask you to either make the flow of time a bit more fitting for the long lifespan of an elf or changing the character into a human or a half-elf.

[Zelda1]

*updated* thanks

[Reventage]

Approved.