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Old 06-15-06, 03:22 PM #1
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Full Name: Jenna Pandorn
Age: 22
Class(es): Cleric
Race: Human Female
Subrace: (If Any)
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Deity: Ilsare
2 Domains (if cleric):Good, Protection
Bio/Description:

Jenna Pandorn paced back and forth in the Temple in Tibum among the displaced from the occupation. She just looked and sighed as she cast a magic on an injured child and healed his wounds.

'We need help.' She thought wearily. 'Ever since the Mistone Alliance started to pull its support...refugees are coming in by the dozens.' Another refugee..a man this time...was vomiting in the corner. A disease cure from Jenna eased his queasiness. 'Marcus said that Kyle is alive on Mistone. And has become a great warrior. Maybe he can convince some to return...'

She took a moment to pray to Ilsare before grabbing her things and leaving. But before going to the docks...she scribbles a note for the head nurse.

"Give this to my father. I will write again once I have found him." With that she boards the boat to Port Hampshire and prays to Ilsare that she will find Kyle.

//Jenna's physical description is similar to Kyle...except her hair is a bit lighter than his.
She is a cleric of Ilsare because that is the deity of the Pandorn fanily.
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Default Re: Jenna Pandorn

A clerical submission will need much more than this. She may be the sister of an established PC, but she needs a story of her own. Also read and make sure you add the require parts for Clerics in the stickied section of this forum.
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Ok then...being a cleric will be a stretch for me. Can I change the class to something else?
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Default Re: Jenna Pandorn

you can make her any class you wish as long as the biography fits the class This bio as it stands is really not enough to support any class. We need to know about her, not just her family. Something about her personality and outlook on things and why she is what she is ( whatever class you decide on). The bio should fit the chosen alignment as well.
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Ok...I'll get on it...I can work wonders...
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Full Name: Jenna Pandorn
Age: 22
Class(es): Rogue
Race: Human Female
Subrace: (If Any)
Alignment: Neutral Good
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"Hey....Pandorn...you have a visitor." The Head Jailer in North Hampshire barked as he opened the cell door. Jenna Panodrn rose...wiping the sleep from her eyes when she saw her eldest sister...Amith...approach. Her eyes betrayed a look of utter annoyance. Jenna went to speak but Amith silenced her with a wave.

"Jenna...Jenna...Jenna...what in the world are we going to do with you?" Amith Pandorn sat down next to her younger sister. Jenna Pandorn just looked down.

"Ami...I'm innocent this time...honest. The purse was just lying there. And how was I supposed to know it belonged to the son of the Magistrate?" Jenna was close to tears. This wasn't the first time she had to be bailed out...but this time she really was innocent.

"Jenna...you are lucky Ganden isn't here. You'd be sitting here for a while. As it is...it is Kyle's reputation that is saving you. Why couldn't you be more like him?" Amith's rebuke stung Jenna. A tear started to roll down her cheek.

"Look...the Magistrate will drop the charge if you would put those skills of yours to good use. And make restitution." She slips a coin purse into Jenna's hand. "And...Jen...this will be the last time." Amith rose and left Jenna to collect her things. Jenna looked into the coin purse. 300 gold sovreigns. 'This will only get me to Mistone.' Jenna thought. 'I will make them proud of me yet.'

A look of determination was in her eye as she left the jail and boarded the next ship for Mistone...

//Hope this is better...

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Hi there
That is much better. Just give us one more paragraph describing her characteristics and her background. Where is she from, her family. Even though we can find this in Kyle's bio I would prefer it to be here as well.
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Full Name: Jenna Pandorn
Age: 22
Class(es): Rogue
Race: Human Female
Subrace: (If Any)
Alignment: Neutral Good
Deity:
2 Domains (if cleric):
Bio/Description:

"Hey....Pandorn...you have a visitor." The Head Jailer in North Hampshire barked as he opened the cell door. Jenna Panodrn rose...wiping the sleep from her eyes when she saw her eldest sister...Amith...approach. Her eyes betrayed a look of utter annoyance. Jenna went to speak but Amith silenced her with a wave.

"Jenna...Jenna...Jenna...what in the world are we going to do with you?" Amith Pandorn sat down next to her younger sister. Jenna Pandorn just looked down.

"Ami...I'm innocent this time...honest. The purse was just lying there. And how was I supposed to know it belonged to the son of the Magistrate?" Jenna was close to tears. This wasn't the first time she had to be bailed out...but this time she really was innocent.

"Jenna...you are lucky Ganden isn't here. You'd be sitting here for a while. As it is...it is Kyle's reputation that is saving you. Why couldn't you be more like him?" Amith's rebuke stung Jenna. A tear started to roll down her cheek.

"Look...the Magistrate will drop the charge if you would put those skills of yours to good use. And make restitution." She slips a coin purse into Jenna's hand. "And...Jen...this will be the last time." Amith rose and left Jenna to collect her things. Jenna looked into the coin purse. 300 gold sovreigns. 'This will only get me to Mistone.' Jenna thought. 'I will make them proud of me yet.'

A look of determination was in her eye as she left the jail and boarded the next ship for Mistone...

//Jenna is 5'10" tall...sandy brown hair similar to Kyle's. She lives in North Hampshire with the rest of the Pandorn clan. The Pandorns are a warrior family...but Jenna wasn't the warrior type. She is nimble and that nimbleness kind of gets her in trouble a lot. Not a 'black sheep'...but her exploits draw the ire of her siblings. She wants to make her family proud as word of Kyle's deeds have reached North Hampshire through the relief effort to Roldem.
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