Thorax Ruinshield

[HooD!uM]

name: Thorax Ruinshield
age: 250
gender: Male
race: Dwarf
class/s :fighter/barbarian
alignment :TN
diety: Vorax
domains:
bio: Thorax as a young dwarf lived in the small town of Hlint. Working hard in the smithy halls he gained a eye for perfection. Often he would slave over the anvil with his hammer bending metals into items of worth or equipment for the average journeyman. And like the equipment he made, he also liked to travel the roads and the countryside. and the caverns underground. nothing comes close to him like a good vein of ore, except a good fight. and Thorax like any typical dwarf, loves to fight. kobolds, orc, ogres. If it smells, kill it his grandpappy used to say.
As his life came into its second century, Thorax took to the road more than to the hot anvil. He travelled the long roads and the even longer seas, finding adventure and rumours of more exotic ores in the lands. But as always, he returns to his town he calls home, with new knowledge of his trips. And many new cuts and dents on his armour. He knew battle, and weilds his emotions well. He can become a wired barbarian, axe swinging everywhich way, or he can become a solid tactician, like a normal dwarven warrior. To Thorax, it depends on his situation. Whatever he chooses, he does both well.
Adding another spike to his armour he drifts of into his past memories. When he was a much younger lad on the road with his father. He was a battlerager, like his father before him. He remembers a time when his father faced off against a troll. Charging towards him in his pointed armour, with a prayer to Vorax, he barreled into the beast. Punching, biting and kickin the creature senseless before bodyslamming it and rubbing the spike deep inside it. Not only did he beat it, but utterly decimated the carcass. but that is the way of these warriors.
A deep sigh comes from his birth as re remembers the old times. But now it is his time. Finishing his armour, he replaces his mallet into his backpac. It will be some time before he hold it again, for now its his turn to bring glory to Vorax. For his father and his father before him, to find the inner warrior within him, that crazed fighter, the primal animal that makes him to become a kuldjargh, a axe weilding form of destruction. With a smile on his face he slips his axe in a loop on his belt and straps his shield on his back. He reaches into his pocket and pulls out five pointed ears from some goblins. "Now, who was it dat wanted 'dese again?"

--- Thorax is a barrel chested dwarf ith a long flowing beard of greyish look and tanned skin. he is friendly and always seeks adventure. When battle comes he always runs into the midst of it, chargin with his dwarven war axe, and when possible he will fight dirty (dirty fighting feat to represent this).

His parents. Thorax dosent remember his mother so well, but his father he remembers well. A gruff dwarf, and many scars to prove his worth. His father is what gave him the desire to become a kuldjargh. but like all axe idiots their time comes. After beating a throng of ogres, and recieving his share of wounds, his father passed on into the halls of vorax.

[IceDragonDuvessa]

I don't really see the need for the cross class with fighter, please detail why the cross class fits rather than just barbarian.

What has happened to the characters parents?

You have 14 characters listed as in your vault on LORE, you are allowed 6. Before this is approved you need to have 9 of those characters deleted. If you choose to abandon this character you still need to have 8 characters deleted.

Thanks!

[HooD!uM]

all i got is 4 characters in my vault. i dont use LORE so i wouldnt know about these 14 characters stored there...as with why fighter with barb...well thats how i like my warriors.

[IceDragonDuvessa]

if there is no RP reason behind it then it will not be approved. Simply wanting a powerful build is not reason enough for approval.

I checked the vault and yes there are only 4 characters so that is not a problem.

Until the bio is updated to barbarian only or to give a reason for the split class besides "I want it" this is denied.

[HooD!uM]

updated my bio...but still honestly dont see what was wrong with it...i was in the bounds of a legal characteras far as i know...

[Filatus]

Make sure you keep a good even progression between the two classes.


[approve]