New Character Submission - Finnegan Fletcher

Nathan · 09-22-07, 05:49 PM

Character: Finnegan Fletcher
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Class: Ranger
Race: Human
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Deity: N/A

Biography:

Finnegan was born in the woods outside of Haven and had lived there all his life. Living outside the protection of the village probably made things more difficult on his family, but Finnegan did not notice. His father was experienced woodsmen and taught Finnegan and his brothers to survive in the wilderness too. They seemed at home in the wilderness, and they were. Throughout his teenage years Finn wandered the wilderness, searching and discovering, trying to expand the range of his known world, along with practicing his skills with his bow. For Finn the bow became more then just a necessary tool of survival, he practiced trick shots in an effort to become a master at the bow, his timing and accuracy became excellent.

But now his parents were becoming older, and it was too much of a liability for the family to live out in the woods anymore, his elderly parents moved into Haven, while Finn was left to experience life on his own, he decide to head off, and explore the rest of the world.

Finnegan has always believed in helping out those weaker, and believed in doing what he felt was right, at the time. He never believed in following any code. He also believed his family's style of living worked best, as appose to living under the structure and rule of a city or kingdom. He is not a very devote follower of Folian S'pae and some clerics might argue blasphemes, as he probably swears to his god as often as he prays to it. He also believes that his skill at the bow is partly credited to Folian, but also that his skill is tribute to Folian.

(( Yes he was introduced to Folian by his father but it does not play an important part in Finnegans life, it has been removed ))

darkstorme · 09-22-07, 05:58 PM

Hi there!

This is an excellent start, and we don't need to see much more, but a little description of Finnegan's personality (what makes him Chaotic Good) and perhaps a nod to his devotion to Folian would round him out nicely.

Once that's done, everything looks good.

Thanks!

Nathan · 09-22-07, 06:19 PM

hmm.. I did something wrong

Nathan · 09-22-07, 06:22 PM

Finnegan has always believed in helping out those weaker, and believed in doing what he felt was right, at the time. He never believed in following any code. He also believed his family's style of living worked best, as appose to living under the structure and rule of a city or kingdom. He is not a very devote follower of Folian S

Nathan · 09-22-07, 06:22 PM

Alright how come my post is always cut off? - I don't have to start a new thread do I?

darkstorme · 09-22-07, 06:39 PM

Are you copying and pasting from a different word processor? (Word, for example?)

Nathan · 09-22-07, 06:51 PM

Sure am, I'll just make two posts

Finnegan has always believed in helping out those weaker, and believed in doing what he felt was right, at the time. He never believed in following any code. He also believed his family's style of living worked best, as appose to living under the structure and rule of a city or kingdom.

Nathan · 09-22-07, 06:52 PM

He is not a very devote follower of Folian S'pae, and some clerics might argue blasphemes, as he probably swears to his god as often as he prays to it. He also believes that his skill at the bow is partly credited to Folian, but also that his skill is tribute to Folian.

darkstorme · 09-22-07, 07:05 PM

In order to solve the Word Bug, just copy and paste into something like Notepad, or Notepad++, then copy from there, having "cleaned" your post - that is, removed all of Word's "special" characters that the forum doesn't like.

Two things, then.

If you could edit your additions into the original post, for continuity's sake, that would be greatly appreciated.

And if the deity field is filled, then that deity features prominently in the character's life. Is Finnegan that kind of follower? (Also, did he start into the worship from his father, or did he come into it on his own?)

You're just about there.

Nathan · 09-22-07, 07:14 PM

OK, updated

darkstorme · 09-22-07, 07:21 PM

Alright, then. Welcome to Layonara!

Your character has been approved.

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