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Old 09-30-07, 02:25 PM #1
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Old 09-30-07, 03:11 PM #2
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Default Re: New Character Submission - Huntemara In’Darsus

The minimum age for half-elves is 20 and the date for the moment is Oclar 2, 1422.

So... it means that you have to wait about two more weeks before this character can be approved.

But nonless, character approvers can take a look at it right now!
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Old 09-30-07, 04:19 PM #3
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Default Re: New Character Submission - Huntemara In’Darsus

Actually ...

It has been stated in the past (in response to Sarah and her twin, in fact) that half-elf + human = human, mechanically. She can be RP'ed as having elven blood (a slight point to the ears, unusually almond-shaped eyes, etc.), but must be "Human" when created.

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Character: Huntemara In’Darsus
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Classes: Rogue
Race: Human
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Deity: Multiple


Biography:

//below is the complete Info as I prepared it before noticing the wizard. some info is also present in the wizard created submission. The birthday below is correct. as rp'ed at that time by my old character Sonya Darsus and her husband Rain Darsus.

Basic info:

Full name at birth: Sarah Tamara Darsus
Nickname: Huntemara In’Darsus (ingame name)
Birthday (age): Jular 7th 1403 (1 of the twins)
Place of birth: Krandor
Place raised: Half Lake Prantz
Gender: Female
Race: ¾ human ¼ Elf (Will pick Human at creation)
Sub race (if any):
Class(es): Rogue
Alignment: LN
Deity:
2 domains:
Languages known: Common and Elven (elven tought by her parents from age 8 I think.)

Looks:
Eye color: Violet
Hair color: White
Height: she is a bit taller then most girls her age.
Weight: Normal for her height and age.
Tatoes: Plenty due to some events during her enslavement.
Distinguising marks: Besides the white hair and violet eyes, she has slight elven like ears and her eyes tend to look a bit elven of shape as well. For the rest she looks like most human girls, perhaps a bit slender that most.
Description (in game): none

Personality:

Loves: To sneak around and listen to people while she shouldn’t.
She loves to Train with the short bow she got. She tries to practice as much as she can. She also likes to talk elven when she can.
Hates: Men as those had enslaved her. There are some exceptions, wich are her brothers, father and uncles.
Fears: She sort of fears the evil that her Grandmother and her father seem to have in them, according to what she found out by reading the journals of her father and mother. She also deeply fears to be enslaved again.
Goals in life: She wants to train hard with her bow and find the ones that had her enslaved and either kill them or bring them to justice. Which ever comes first.
View(s) on other races: She trusts elven females the most. Other races she trusts less, Especially the men.
Background: //most can be found in her dairy.
http://forums.layonara.com/developme...now-angel.html

Addition to background:
Sarah has been enslaved for over 6 months, during that time she was tortured just for the fun of it. Being the only girl on the slave ship made it even worse. Every time she tried to escape she was punished as seen fit by the captain. After a while she became a test subject for a wizard. After the 6 months she was to be transported to the wizard’s lair. But she escaped during the trip. She was rescued by a group of female elves who took her in as one of there own. She has been trained by and elf to use her anger in her attacks, and to keep it in check when she needed to hide from her enemies. During these days she also changed her name to Huntemara In'Darsus. Her new friends called her Hunter Tamara at first but it soon became Huntemara. “In'Darsus” is the last name of the ancestors her father. She decided to use it with honour.

During her time with the elves she spoke only elfish with them. Not just because the elves weren’t good in the language of humans but also since it was one of the few things she had that reminded her of her parents. It was both her mother and father that taught her how to speak and write elven from a young age. Her mother started by showing pictures of things along with the human word for it. Then she spoke it in elven. Sarah loved to hear elven words since it made her feel so much closer to her father and her elven ancestors, which she asked a lot about when her father had time. After about a year of trying to speak elfish her father taught her how to write elven. Long hard hours of studying gave Sarah the ability to speak in elven sooner then her parents could have hoped for. By the time she got in her teens, Sarah would almost only speak in elven to her father and mother.



Extended info:

Parents name(s): Rain and Sonya Darsus
Sibling Name(s) (brother/sisters): Tristan (her twin brother), The triplets Anaya, Sil’via and Elgon and her youngest brother Elyam.
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Default Re: New Character Submission - Huntemara In

Due to the human template being used, the age restriction will be lowered to 18 (human adult age), so you can already create her as soon as she's approved.

Something that I think should be added more about is on the elven language ear. It's quite clear from an IC-perspective that she would have been taught it by her parents, but for it being completely fair compared to all other new submissions, it has to be stated in the biography itself also.

Like... what did she think about the elven language? Did she find it boring to learn how to write in such a complex language? Sleepless nights trying to remember strange words? Jealous of the true elves who can speak it 110% fluently?
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Changes made. added more info on the elven language sarah knows.
Let me know if this is enough.
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Default Re: New Character Submission - Huntemara In’Darsus

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