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Old 10-13-07, 10:17 AM #1
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Default Character Submission Lee Owens

This is my first character and I'm not all that familiar with Layonara lore so I dont know a location for where my character would have been born and I couldnt decide on one diety in particular because I wasnt sure which one would fit best. I'm hoping to learn from this character and get a feel for the server before spending several hours learning about the geography and history of the world.



Character: Lee Owens
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Classes: Fighter
Race: Human
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Dieties: Multiple


Biography

For all my life I have been a simple farmer. Harvesting the crops on my father's farm may seem like a good honest job for some but for me I long for the taste of adventure. I often fantasise about slaying dragons and climbing high mountain peaks and becomming a hero like in the tales you hear at the campfire. Now that I'm old enough I plan to distance myself from my past and set forth into the world to make a name for myself. Wirh some hard work and dedication I will be the greatest adventurer ever to walk the earth!



On his father's farm Lee has led a sheltered quite life and knows little of the outside world. This doesnt affect his confidence however and he his quick to act and not one to stand around and think the situation through. He does what he thinks is right and doesnt care much for written laws and authority. Instead he does what is the right thing to do or the mostconvienent at the time. He is one to help just about anybody when they are in need. Because of his lack of knowledge he is very gullible and easily persuded.
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Old 10-13-07, 12:50 PM #2
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Default Re: Character Submission Lee Owens

Sounds good, regarding the statements at the top - I don't think you need to worry about deities too much, as the majority of the population just tips their hat to whichever deity might help them out at the moment. So there was probably a lot of Prunilla hat-tipping at the farm, perhaps some Vorax hat-tipping for combat training, etc, with little true impact on his life or signs of devotion.

The starting areas are Port Hempstead or Fort Vehl - the former has a lot of farmlands surrounding it - a pretty big stretch of farming community, so maybe that would be the simplest approach. His parents or grandparents could perhaps remember the days when they were always under the boot of the greedy port, but in the last, say, 50-60 years or so, with a change of authority the officials have been mostly geared to aid the people and not profit from them, a dedication shown in the dark ages as the so-called City of Gold used its vast wealth in attempts to improve conditions and feed the people and find help for the fields (such as Prunilla's faithful). Despite that, many starved and no one prospered.

Regarding that time: Lee himself was born in darkness - in 1402, the year of his birth, Sinthar Bloodstone, the world's greatest threat, was finally vanquished for good, but the resulting devastation was great - an explosion all the way in Belinara was so great that the dust and debris spread into the sky and veiled the sun for almost 20 years. Temperatures were lowered, and famines and plagues spread as Layonara entered a dark age. The farming communities were dealt a heavy blow (including Lee's) as the land, without the sun, was often barren or close to it. Many died, and many blamed the Dragoncalled who had rid the world of Bloodstone (a dragon slayer from the original dragon wars...perhaps just what we need now that rumors of dragons resurfacing abound), while others understood that without his death and all its consequences, the world would not have survived to struggle on.

Recently (a few years), the sky was cleansed, not just over a long grueling period of time but seemingly by the actions again of others, as it seemed to happen almost magically - there one day, gone again the next, the shock of the sun over pale faces present again.

Perhaps, a few years after the people and farms and land begin trying to go into healing mode, that is why Lee ventured to the city, considering his entire life prior had been in relative darkness? Maybe that's even why he became more skilled at arms? You tell me.

As I said, for a human fighter that length of writing works for me, but you sounded like you might want to know more about your character's relation to the world before plopping him into it or thinking about how he got there. I can give you its recent history as it pertains to him, but it's up to you to decide where he fits into it.

((Edit - I know that's long, but there are some things that affected all characters in Layonara, so it seemed like it might be helpful. Sorry for the read!))

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Default Re: Character Submission Lee Owens

Okay then. Lee was born out on the farming outskirts of Port Hempstead and had recieved some training in weapons during the time of darkness. After learning how to fight and handle a sword he started to long for adventure and decided to leave the farmer's life behind.



Oh and I diddnt mind the read at all your a good writer lol
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Old 10-14-07, 01:13 AM #4
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Default Re: Character Submission Lee Owens

As Acacea said, this length and depth of writing suffices.

Welcome to Layonara, Lee.

Your character has been approved.

Server address is west.layonara.com
Password is layoplayer

Some final notes on character creation:
  • Please note that racial adjustments for players with subraces are skin based and thus get applied after getting in game.
  • Only two ability scores can be less than 10 and only one can be less than 8 after racial adjustments
  • Brownies, when selecting a head, the head you choose on the halfling selection will correspond to that numbered head for elves (for example, clicking right 6 times on the head selection during character creation will take the 6th head when clicking right on the elf creation)
  • Half-giants and ogres, please ask for a GM (type /dm Anyone here?) if you would like to change to a custom skin.

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