New Character Submission - Perigrin Janger

[aleatherglove]

Character: Perigrin Janger
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Class: Rogue
Race: Halfling
Alignment: Chaotic Good



Biography:

You see, Perigrin Janger was a normal halfling child, with a normal halfling upbringing, in a normal halfling house on the rolling plains of Dregar ; but Perigrin didn't see it that way. To Perigrin the world had been unfair to his father. After all it had taken his wife in childbirth and left him to raise a boy on his own. The world had beaten down a good man with good morals for no reason but cruelty... at least that is the way it seemed in Perigrin's eyes. He had watched his father struggle year after year with the harvest to have nothing to show in return. It became too much for Perigrin to bear.

His father always talked of the goodness inherent in man and how a man should always follow his heart. His father taught Perigrin his limited knowledge in the ways of the world and how to be handle himself in rough situations. The world taught Perigrin that life isn't always fair. His limited years had shown him that one can't wait for something good to happen. And experience had proven if an opportunity presents itself, no matter how small, it must be taken immediately.

Perigrin learned early in life that sometimes a person would have to do anything necessary to survive. He would sometimes sneak off the farm at night and into the local merchant's shop. He would take just enough of what was needed to provide for himself and his father but never more. His father didn't say a word but Perigrin could always see the shame in his father's eyes when he would awaken to more than he went to bed with the night before. Perhaps it was one too many of these days feeling his father's shame that finally inspired Perigrin to leave. Perhaps it was that he wanted to find his own way in life. Or, perhaps Perigrin's feeling that the world has been overlooking him too has driven him to leave. No matter the truth now. The halfling is already 10 miles from home and only a few steps away from his first adventure.

[minerva]

This is nice and concise. Could you add just a bit more to stress the alignment because when I read this I get NG or CG not LN.

Also when putting a deitiy in the deity field you are declaring that one above all others - not a pious as a cleric but one step down from one and one above those that might only pray to Prunilla for home and hearth related subjects. Characters that are not clerics or paladins do not need to have declared deity. But if Lady Comfort does guide him - she is Chaotic Good in nature - a long ways from Lawful Neutral.

[aleatherglove]

*Bump* Changes made. Thanks for the input on the deity i thought i had to have one listed... and good call on the alignment, i should have re-read my story after i had everything hashed out. Thanks again.

[minerva]

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