New Character Submission - Leshariel

[Leshariel]

Character: Leshariel
Age: 114
Gender: Female
Class: Ranger/Bard
Race: Moon Elf
Alignment: Neutral Good

Biography:

Leshariel in Elvish means "Leaf on the Wind"

Appreance:
Incredible graceful, with eyes always alert and watchful. Leshariel is quick with a smile and naturally curious.

Biography:

Her Mother Ariduna was a Bard, her Father Lorifiel an Arcane Archer. Ariduna was not a natural to the forest. She was born in Pranzis (then Prantz) and her parents played in the capitol symphony orchestra. Ariduna grew up and was schooled to play the lute.

Lorifiel made the Forest of Fog his home ran messages between outposts. Being quick in his duties, he was chosen to go into Prantz and get the ore shipments several rangers needed for outfitting. One day Lorifiel finished his business and set out to leave. By chance he saw Ariduna across the square and they instantly fell in love.

Lorifiel introduced himself and he suddenly had every excuse to go back into the city. Ariduna's studies declined and her parents pondered what was happening. They looked into it and found out the truth. They sent some time with Lorifiel and approved of the couple. Lorifiel and Ariduna were quickly married. Leshariel was born and the couple enjoyed a great time of peace.

Blood then came into the world and everything changed. Lorifiel was called into duty and began his old duties of running between outposts. Ariduna stayed in the city with her parents and Leshariel was enrolled in school. With the fighting ranging across the world, blame began to set in. Bitterness clouded judgment. Ariduna and Leshariel were out in public and were attacked by an angry mob. they blamed the elves for the war. Ariduna was beaten badly and almost killed before the guard came. Her parents took care of her and when Lorifiel returned they talked upon what to do.

It was decided Leshariel would go to the forest and stay in safety there. Ariduna and her parents would stay in the city, they had many friends in high places and felt safe.

Leshariel took to the woods and was given her first bow at age 35. She quickly followed in her Fathers footsteps and took to the life of a Ranger with ease.

When gracious King Waylend died, the times of riots and unrest came. Her family had already seen what could happen and they quickly spoke out against racial prejudiced. Being likely targets, they were marked as traitors to the Kingdom. Lorifiel took his family and they all fled to Mistone. They wandered for many months until bounty hunters found them near Hlint. Lorifiel lead them on a marry chase into Silkwood and made sure they did not leave.

They stayed in Silkwood for some time fearing more pursuit. The forest was in there blood and they enjoyed the repast. Leshariel and Lorifiel had no hard time teasing Ariduna for her lack of woodsmanship. After some years, Leshariel's grandparents heard of an opportunity in Blackford Castle to play music again. They quietly asked around and discovered they were no warrant or bounties out and decided to leave the woods.

Leifiel and Ariduna decided to stay and enjoy the peace they found in Silkwood. Leshariel continued her training in wood craft, though her mother demanded she pick up her old studies. Leshariel had the gift for music but loved the woods her father showed her.

Leshariel was by now a beautiful young Moon Elf and she decided to seek permission to venture out. Her parents talked about it and they agreed. She was made to promise to return often and she sent out south to Port Hempstead.

[darkstorme]

Hi Lesharial!

Your submission is currently under review, but the reviewer is temporarily detained. I can assure you that the review will be posted as soon as possible.

Thanks in advance for your patience.

[Rowana]

Terribly sorry for the wait, Leshariel! And thanks for your patience already!

This is a great start for biography. Once we address a couple of things you will be quickly into the world of Layonara.

Firstly, of course as is stated in the submission guidelines, we do not approve PrCs on initial submission. You will need to reapply for this in a few weeks when you are closer to the requirements for the class of Arcane Archer.

The second issue I'd like to address is the lack of support for your multi-class of bard. Clearly there is good ground for Ranger in this write up! But there isn't much within that describes what about her makes her bardly. This doesn't mean I want you to have her writing sonnets or anything as there are many ways to approach this aspect. So unless you need help I will leave that up to your imagination!

When these issues are addressed please feel free to give your thread a bump for further review!

~row

[Leshariel]

Thank you Row!

My boyfriend is helping me with this. We will think the bard over and make changes.

[Leshariel]

Here is the updated version!

[Rowana]

Thanks for the update and sorry for the delayed response. I just need to fact check one thing before I post reply. Thanks for your continued patience!

~row

[Rowana]

Hello again and sorry for the delay! Again!

I just wanted to point out that the city was Pranzis first and then became Prantz, as I'm not certain which way your implication was indicating.

That said....

Your character has been approved.

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Welcome Leshariel to Layonara