Character Submission - Kizia Addams

[kizia]

Name: Kizia Addams
Age : 18
Class: Fighter
Race: Human
Alignment : NG
Diety:


Biography:

Kizia was born in Krandor but at a very early age her and her parents moved to Port hempstead so her father would be closer to his work. She has brown hair and blue eyes. She stands at 5ft 4 inches tall. Her mother was a housewife and a brilliant cook and her father was an armour and weapons Smithy.

Kizia used to love to sit in the kitchen learning to cook with her mother although she did used to make an awfull mess with the flour when she was baking and she used to burn a lot also.

When Kizia turned 10 years old her Father started to take her to the smithy with him to teach her how to be able to make her own armour. She used to love to go to the smithy although the first few helmets she made wouldnt have even gone on a cats head let alone a humans she started to get quite good at it.

By the time she was 13 her father had made kizia her own sword and sheild and had taught her how to wield them properly. Kizia used to work 3 days a week with her father in the smithy and 3 days a week with her mother in the kitchen and used to spend one day a week having a rest.

when Kizia was 15 her father had decided she was old enough and strong enough to be able to go mining with him. This she loved more and more each time she went.

Growing up in a loving family Kizia's had no need to ever lie . Whenever Kizia told her parents shed help with jobs she always used to keep her word and do whatever she had promised to do. Kizia is a loyal person , shed help her friends in anyway possible , she works hard and would never look to take the easy route .


On her 18th Birthday Kizia's parents had decided that she was finally old enough and wise enough to be able to go out into the world on her own

and this she did, packed with her all the recipe cards her mother could stuff into her bags so that she would at least not starve and enough food to last her a month, Kizia set off on her travels to find her own place in the world of Layorana.

[jrizz]

This is a good start. Just a couple of things need to be addressed:

1. Was she born in Krandor then they moved to Hempstead? The two are too far away from each other for her father to travel back and forth every day.
2. Please add a bit more about why she is TN. How does she see the world and how did she come to view it that way. Perhaps some defining events would help as well.

[kizia]

Edited ... Added that her family moved to Hempstead at an early age to be close to her farthers work , and changed Alignment to NG as it fits with her upbrining a little better

[jrizz]

Your character has been approved.

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