Character Submission Valorn Wayfarer

[Holywarrior_1]

Name: Valorn Wayfarer
Age:18
Class: Ranger/ Arcane archer (if allowed)
Race:Human
Subrace:Aasimar
Alignment:Chaotic Good
Deity:Aeridin
(sorry if the bio sucks im not very good at writing storys)

Raised in a small village you were well liked ever since you were given to your aunt and uncle. You never really wondered about your true parents. You were happy and at the time that was all that really matered. At two you hardly think of anything but your happyness. Little did you know that was soon to change. They came in the night. Goblins, swarms of them. By the time you awoke the village was ablaze. You saw villagers being slaughtered left and right your aunt and uncle fighting for their lifes. they were able to keep them at bay for only a few moments until they were overuned. You watched in horror as your aunt was clubbed to death and your uncle stabbed in the chest. He notices you and says one word. "run!" You ran for hours until you could run no longer and colapsed on the ground weeping for your fallen family until your cryed yourself to sleep. As you slept two figures came apon you. They were elves from a druid groove nearby.They took you in and sheltered you. Eventually you started to learn the ways of nature from them and studdied under them. You trained for 16 years learning the ways of nature, how to talk to animals and move through the forest without being seen or heard. Eventually you disided to leave the groove and went on your way, trying to mak your mark in the world.

[EdTheKet]

sorry if the bio sucks im not very good at writing storys

No worries, it doesn't suck, it just requires something more because you're submitting for a special subrace.
Since you are applying for a special subrace, please provide us with a little more detail to just how that makes him different from a regular human?
Also, PrCs are not approved upon submission, however, if you want to go arcane archer in the end through RP, you're going to need bard, wizard or sorceror levels to go AA, so you might want to add that in. (Maybe sorceror would be a good idea if you decide to go for an aasimar).
Please adapt the bio and we'll read it again. Thanks.

[Holywarrior_1]

Name:Valorn Wayfarer
Age:18
Class:Ranger/Sorcerer/Arcane Archer
Race:Human
Subrace:Aasimar
Alignment:Chaotic Good
Deity:Aeridin
Ok lets try this again

Raised on a farm buy your aunt and uncle you lived a quiet and peaceful life despite your heiritage.You are and Aasimar, a human touched buy a planetar. Those who know you know that you are a kind and carismatic boy at the age of ten. You are tall for your age with a medium build due to working around the farm. You always hoped that your life would always be this peaceful. But destinly had othe things instore for you. One summer night it happened. A great red dragon came and attacked the town you lived near. The townsfolk didn't stand a chance. Once the creature finished with the town it attack the surounding buildings. Including your farm. Only you made it out in time. You wached in horror as the dragon burned the barn to ashes, your aunt and uncle with it.
You heard the blood-chilling screams of agony as they burned to death within the house. You watched as the dragon flew off into the night roaring triumphantly. Stunned you fell back and sat there for hours shock at what just happened. In the morning when you awoke from a restless sleep, you found people searching the charred remains of the town. Nomads, scavengers. You went over to them and tell them to leave but they overpowered you and knock you out before you can say a word. Whenyou wake up you fand that you have been carted off with the nomads and are at a trading post. You managed to escape them by fleeing into the woods. You traveled for hours until you colapsed exausted on the ground and drifted off. While you were unconsious, two figures came upon you. They were elves from a druid groove nearby. They took you in and sheltered you. You stayed there for over 8 years trainning to be a ranger learning the ways of nature, talking to annimals, moving without being seen or heard. Eventually you disided to leave the groove and go exploring and to exact revenge on the dragon that distroyed your farm and the town. With a fond farwell to the druids of the groove you leave to make your mark on the world.

[EdTheKet]

You probably aren't aware, but there are at the moment only 4 big dragons left onÂLayonara, and one of them is red (Fisterion). They're all being hunted by the main plot's bad guy, Sinthar Bloodstone, so they're in hiding. So your village couldn't have been burned by him, as that would probably put Bloodstone on his tail.

[Holywarrior_1]

Name:Valorn Wayfarer
Age:18
Class:Ranger/Sorcerer/Arcane Archer
Race:Human
Subrace:Aasimar
Alignment:Chaotic Good
Deity:Aeridin
(Ok thanks for the tip. this should be up to date)

Raised on a farm buy your aunt and uncle you lived a quiet and peaceful life despite your heiritage.You are and Aasimar, a human touched buy a planetar. Those who know you know that you are a kind and carismatic boy at the age of ten. You are tall for your age with a medium build due to working around the farm. You always hoped that your life would always be this peaceful. But destinly had othe things instore for you. One summer night it happened. A hoard of orcs came and attacked the town you lived near. The townsfolk didn't stand a chance. Once the hoard finished with the town it attacked the surounding buildings. Including your farm. Only you made it out in time. You wached in horror as the orcs burned the barn to ashes, your aunt and uncle with it.
You heard the blood-chilling screams of agony as they burned to death within the house. You watched as the orcs moved on into the night cheering triumphantly. Stunned you fell back and sat there for hours shocked at what just happened. In the morning when you awoke from a restless sleep, you found people searching the charred remains of the town. Nomads, scavengers. You went over to them and tell them to leave but they overpowered you and knocked you out before you can say a word. When you wake up you find that you have been carted off with the nomads and are at a trading post. You managed to escape them by fleeing into the woods. You traveled for hours until you colapsed exausted on the ground and drifted off. While you were unconsious, two figures came upon you. They were elves from a druid groove nearby. They took you in and sheltered you. You stayed there for over 8 years trainning to be a ranger learning the ways of nature, talking to annimals, moving without being seen or heard. Eventually you disided to leave the groove and go exploring and to exact revenge on the dragon that distroyed your farm and the town. With a fond farwell to the druids of the groove you leave to make your mark on the world.

[IceDragonDuvessa]

Approved as ranger/sorceror.

Please keep in mind that your subrace adjustments will be made AFTER you create and enter game... so please allocate ability points accordingly.

Also Arcane Archer, as Ed stated, is a prestige class that will need to be attained through RP.

The server IP is 64.127.106.68 and Layonara can be found under Roleplay on Gamespy.

The server password is layoplayer

[Holywarrior_1]

I go to where you daid but i don't see Layonara on the servers list i have everything installed, any idea whats wrong?