Chicky Pickins re-submission

[joey Bitchin]

I hope this is good enough please give me advice on any info needed

Full Name:Chicky Pickins
Age:21
Class(es):Sorceress
Race:Half-elf
Subrace:n/a
Alignment:Chaotic Good
Deity:n/a
Domains (if cleric):
Short Bio/Description:

Chicky, a half-elf born into poverty raised by her human father Slym and Elven mother Neysa, was brought up on a farm west of mistone. Blessed with her mothers beauty and charm she was able to get anything she asked for from anyone and was able to develop a powerful will to use magic to serve her needs. Being raised also by her father she was a very moral and kind person. This is what her mother fell in love with when she met him. If fact, her mother was disowned by her elitest family when they discovered they Wed. Chicky who is very independent wanted something more for her life other than farming left home to expand her special abilities.

[Reventage]

Please give us a bit more information of his personality. Maybe tell us how he feels about being half human, half elf or tell us how he sees his natural ability to tap into the weave to cast spells.

[joey Bitchin]

Full Name:Chicky Pickins
Age:21
Class(es):Sorceress
Race:Half-elf
Subrace:n/a
Alignment:Chaotic Good
Deity:n/a
Domains (if cleric):
Short Bio/Description:

Chicky, a half-elf born into poverty raised by her human father Slym and Elven mother Neysa, was brought up on a farm west of mistone. Blessed with her mothers beauty and charm she was able to get anything she asked for from anyone and was able to develop a powerful will to use magic to serve her needs. Like her father she was a very moral and kind person. This is what her mother fell in love with when she met her father. If fact, her mother was disowned by her elitest family when they discovered they Wed. This led to her distain from the wealthy and especially for the elvish upper class. Her mother, although being proud of her heritage, did not force the elvish traditons and deities on her except the elvish language, which she thought would be important to her incase she had a change of heart. On the other hand she embraced her human side, which she always annouced when was called "half-elve" she said,"my better half is the human half".This is not to say she hates all elvish kind, it is just reffering to her grandparents on her mothers side, of whom she had never met.In fact, she heard her elvish grandmother was quite a powerful sorceress this is how she figures she got her magical talents.Chicky, who is very independent wanted something more for her life other than farming, left home to expand her special abilities and to discover the world.

[Leanthar]

Everything is now okay except your name sounds strange.... Perhaps it is just me... But please choose a different name. Thank you.

[stormspirit]

Yep..funnny and strange, still it gave me a moment chuckling.

[joey Bitchin]

The name "chicky" was dirived from her father, having experience with farm animals, thought she looked like a baby chicken when she was born hence the "Chicky". But I can still change it to something else if required.

[stormspirit]

I will leave the boss to decide since he put forward the required change.

[Leanthar]

I do understand, but please change the name.

[joey Bitchin]

Full Name:Jod'e Pickins
Age:21
Class(es):Sorceress
Race:Half-elf
Subrace:n/a
Alignment:Chaotic Good
Deity:n/a
Domains (if cleric):
Short Bio/Description:

Jod'e, a half-elf born into poverty raised by her human father Slym and Elven mother Neysa, was brought up on a farm west of mistone. Blessed with her mothers beauty and charm she was able to get anything she asked for from anyone and was able to develop a powerful will to use magic to serve her needs. Like her father she was a very moral and kind person. This is what her mother fell in love with when she met her father. If fact, her mother was disowned by her elitest family when they discovered they Wed. This led to her distain from the wealthy and especially for the elvish upper class. Her mother, although being proud of her heritage, did not force the elvish traditons and deities on her except the elvish language, which she thought would be important to her incase she had a change of heart. On the other hand she embraced her human side, which she always annouced when was called "half-elve" she said,"my better half is the human half".This is not to say she hates all elvish kind, it is just reffering to her grandparents on her mothers side, of whom she had never met.In fact, she heard her elvish grandmother was quite a powerful sorceress this is how she figures she got her magical talents.Chicky, who is very independent wanted something more for her life other than farming, left home to expand her special abilities and to discover the world.

[stormspirit]

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