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12-13-06, 07:45 AM
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|  Black Tower - Abkar Sensbane - Convo Typo and Unrecognized token.
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 12:12:18] Abkar Sensbane: Xora has no doubt told you about the vial. Now, what would she have said? It's used to "cleanse" a weakened Bloodpool? *He laughs slightly.* Now, what does that mean anyway? Clense. *He taps his finger on the arm of the chair again.* Cleaning is usually used to purify something, to make it better. Now surely you, of all people, wouldn't want this of a Bloodpool? Two spellings of the word cleanse, I belive the first spelling is correct. I would also submit this ... [CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 12:12:46] Abkar Sensbane: *A smile slowly spreads across his lips.* Then you are a bigger fool than I have thought. You will put more at risk then yourself, and Evil will prevail. Is that really what you want? Besides that, we could offer you things Xora would never dream of offering someone such as yourself. [CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 12:13:08] Elrebrion Galuin: Like what would you offer? [CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 12:13:08] Abkar Sensbane: Well, what is it you want to do what we ask. 10,000gp, 20,000gp. The Last line I had to read a couple times. It just doesn't read smoothly as it is...just a comma after 'want', not to mention a question mark at the end of the sentence, that might suffice. Or maybe switch it around like, 'Well, to do what we want, what would you ask? 10,000 or maybe 20,000gp? Just a suggestion.... |  |   | |
12-13-06, 08:34 AM
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| RE: Black Tower - Abkar Sensbane - Convo Typo and Unrecognized token.
An Addendum :)
I think the flags on the conversation need to be looked at also.
This one time when I told him I want 100, 000 gold from him for the vial and its contents...
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:08:13] Elrebrion Galuin: I really don't care. I'm in it for the pay.
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:08:13] Abkar Sensbane: Well, what is it you want to do what we ask. 10,000gp, 20,000gp.
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:08:28] Elrebrion Galuin: Surely you can afford more. Try adding another zero.
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:08:29] Abkar Sensbane: You are a perceptive one. Fine. 100,000 gold. No more, no less. I don't care how you do it, here is what we want. You go to Xora, if you have not already, you get the list of components and a vial from her. Do exactly as she says to add the components to the vial, and then bring it back to us. And do not mention us to her. Understood?
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:08:45] Your journal has been updated. Wizard's Tower
I got the journal entry, but I didn't get it here....
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:07:30] Elrebrion Galuin: No, I don't want this.
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:07:30] Abkar Sensbane: No, no I did not think so. Which is good. Good for both of us. So instead you can do what I ask of you. That is, I want you to bring me the vial once it is complete.
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:07:39] Elrebrion Galuin: Alright, I'll bring you the vial instead.
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:07:39] Abkar Sensbane: You have made a wise choice. Now, If you have not already, find out from Xora all of the components needed for the vial, and obtain the vial from her. Then go, and do not return until you have found them all. Understood?
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:07:48] Elrebrion Galuin: Yes. *Leave*
Seems like I should since I agree to give it to him, although we didn't talk about gold :) | | | | |
12-13-06, 08:52 AM
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| RE: Black Tower - Abkar Sensbane - Convo Typo and Unrecognized token.
Phew, a few things in this convo :)
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:05:09] Abkar Sensbane: *He glances over to Reginald and then back to you* We are a group of Wizard's whose art and power in manipulating The Weave is unmatched by many. Our power unparalleled by those who study magic, and our wealth unparalleled by all but few. To some, we would be know us as the Black Wizards. But that is not important right now. What is important is that we know you were going to aid Xora. We can not let you do that.
Well these lines "We are a group of Wizard's whose art and power in manipulating The Weave is unmatched by many. Our power unparalleled by those who study magic, and our wealth unparalleled by all but few" I think you are stating the same thing twice when you say their power is unmatched in the first sentence, and then you say unparalleled in the second. I think it could go a little smoother with something like 'We are a group of Wizard's whose art and power in manipulating The Weave is unmatched by any who study magic, and our wealth is unparalleled by all but a few.'
Again, these are just suggestions I hope I'm not stepping on anyones toes. ;) | | | | |
12-13-06, 08:48 PM
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| RE: Black Tower - Abkar Sensbane - Convo Typo and Unrecognized token.
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To some, we would be know us as the Black Wizards.
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12-13-06, 08:51 PM
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| RE: Black Tower - Abkar Sensbane - Convo Typo and Unrecognized token.
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Berginyan - 12/13/2006 11:34 AM
An Addendum :)
I think the flags on the conversation need to be looked at also.
This one time when I told him I want 100, 000 gold from him for the vial and its contents...
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:08:13] Elrebrion Galuin: I really don't care. I'm in it for the pay.
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:08:13] Abkar Sensbane: Well, what is it you want to do what we ask. 10,000gp, 20,000gp.
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:08:28] Elrebrion Galuin: Surely you can afford more. Try adding another zero.
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:08:29] Abkar Sensbane: You are a perceptive one. Fine. 100,000 gold. No more, no less. I don't care how you do it, here is what we want. You go to Xora, if you have not already, you get the list of components and a vial from her. Do exactly as she says to add the components to the vial, and then bring it back to us. And do not mention us to her. Understood?
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:08:45] Your journal has been updated. Wizard's Tower
I got the journal entry, but I didn't get it here....
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:07:30] Elrebrion Galuin: No, I don't want this.
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:07:30] Abkar Sensbane: No, no I did not think so. Which is good. Good for both of us. So instead you can do what I ask of you. That is, I want you to bring me the vial once it is complete.
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:07:39] Elrebrion Galuin: Alright, I'll bring you the vial instead.
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:07:39] Abkar Sensbane: You have made a wise choice. Now, If you have not already, find out from Xora all of the components needed for the vial, and obtain the vial from her. Then go, and do not return until you have found them all. Understood?
[CHAT WINDOW TEXT] [Wed Dec 13 13:07:48] Elrebrion Galuin: Yes. *Leave*
Seems like I should since I agree to give it to him, although we didn't talk about gold :)
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12-13-06, 08:53 PM
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All others fixed
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| Re: Black Tower - Abkar Sensbane - Convo Typo and Unrecognized token.
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