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Character Submission: Krodish
« on: September 07, 2023, 04:01:18 am »
Name: Krodish
Race: Human
Age: 25
Classes Split by 20: Fighter (14) / Weapon Master (6)
Alignment: Lawful Good
Deity: Acknowledges all but doesn't devote to one.
Bio: Krodish finds peace of mind with a weapon in his hands.  Not that he has ever considered his life all that difficult however.  Things just make more sense.  He does hope someday to use this to serve those around him better.  Not much for words his actions are often all he has.  The strong protect the weak.  A good weapon in his hands definitely makes him strong.  There must be a weapon out there that can make him even stronger.  One meant for him.  He sees those nimble and graceful able to flick the end of their dainty weapons in a fight and cause alot of harm.  He sees those with muscular frames swinging large weapons in great arcs causing their enemies to fear every swing.  Neither really feel quite right. 
Very few have these weapons that seem to do a bit of both.  They are large weapons but deadly on both ends.  The few skilled in using them seem almost graceful. Those that do not focus themselves find they are a hindrance.  But something about them always draws Krodish's attention.  They almost call to him.  Could this be what completes him?  One man, one weapon, standing against the evil of the world.  No,  not one man and one weapon.  A weapon as extension of the man.  Putting the pieces back together of something he didnt know was broken. 
So he sets out on the road to find his missing piece.  Those good people he meets along the road that have need of his services he will gladly  protect.  Each fight bringing him closer.  A simple man, a simple purpose. 

(havent decided which weapon he will focus on, just that it will likely be a double weapon)
« Last Edit: September 20, 2023, 05:33:28 pm by StormChaser »
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Re: Character Submission: Krodish
« Reply #1 on: September 17, 2023, 11:23:46 pm »
just wanted to bump my submission as it has been almost two weeks


Re: Character Submission: Krodish
« Reply #2 on: September 20, 2023, 03:08:39 pm »
Hey there StormChaser,

I am terribly sorry for the delay on our side. I had some health related issues and had to stay in the hospital for a few days. Now that I am back, let's take a look into this submission.

I don't see anything wrong with the submission per se, but even though WM is a mundane PrC and can be approved upon submission, I'd like to see his biography a bit more extended. I.e. you could  focus on his alignment ("The strong protect the weak") and extend it on how this motivates him on how to become one with his weapon. Maybe there is a reason / backstory behind his sense of justice?



Re: Character Submission: Krodish
« Reply #3 on: September 20, 2023, 05:36:44 pm »
No worries, just was a gentle reminder.  Hope you feel better.  I did some updates, but wanted to keep it simple as thats how the character himself will be played.   as for the weapon i havent had a chance to try out the mechanics of the double weapons in game yet so not positive which one he will ultimately chose.  was no RP reason to use the feats to try them out on my other character lol.


Re: Character Submission: Krodish
« Reply #4 on: September 21, 2023, 07:46:18 am »
Hey there,

Thank you for the provided update!