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chunkyjr3575

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    Teax
    « on: September 19, 2005, 11:06:00 am »
    Name:Teax
    Age:21
    Race:Human
    Class:Ranger
    Alignment:True neutral

    Story:
    It was like no other day in the village of Kheldell, I have been living in the village all my life with my mother and father. My mum was a great and powerful wizard and my dad was a skilled Ranger, they would take it in turns to teach me with their skills, my mother would teach me magic and my father would teach me how to weild two swords and use bow.
    Thats where it all went Wrong.

    It was my 16th birthday.
    My mother was inside perfecting her spells and me and my father were working the farm.
    A strange looking man walked past and I over-heard them saying that a powerful wizard was near town and was looking for my mother.
    I didn't know why.
    I rushed indoors to warn her but it was to late.
    As seen as I got near the edge of the farm a great wall of fire spread around the farm and my home.
    I was shocked.
    I didnt't know what to do.
    A man and a panther appeared through the flames.
    All of a sudden his panther attacked my dad.
    He was ripped apart
    right before my eyes.

    My mother rushed outside and began to stare at the man.
    They both began to mumble, then suddenly, i was sent flying backwards, disoriantating me.
    Minutes felt like hours.
    All seemed to be going well for my mother, but she was just not strong enough.
    The man overpowered her and in seconds, blow her body up into a thousand pieces.
    He then turned his attention onto me.
    He picked up my weakened body, and began pushing my face into the flames.
    My life ended there.
    well, it would have, if it wasn't for....him.
    An elven wizard appeared from nowhere.
    His left arm was incased in metal.
    The man turned his attention to this new threat.
    The man with the metal arm fired a great bolt of lightening, and the panther was no more.
    The elven wizard reflected a fireball back at the man who killed my parents.
    Then as the fireball was about to hit me, I blanked out and when I awoke, I was in a a forest,
    which I later found out was The High Forest.
    I was discovered by a group of rangers, they took me in, and helped me back on my feet.
    My face has been scared ever since though, which is why I always cover my face with a mask.
    That is when I knew, I would be able to become like my father.
    A skilled ranger, although he was unable to stop the panther from killing him, I will always be prepared.
    The rangers were old friends with my father.
    My blood is with nature, not with wizardry. Although I do have limited use to spells, I never want to be a wizard.
    They cause too much pain.
    I don't want to cause pain, like was caused to me.

    Who was that man who killed my parents?
    Who was that elf who saved my life?
    Why me?
    I ask myself these questions all the time.

    My story starts here,
    To find the answers to my questions,
    To take revenge on my family,
    To find the Elf who saved my life,
    And to become more stronger than my parents had ever been.....
     

    ZeroVega

    RE: Teax
    « Reply #1 on: September 19, 2005, 11:14:00 am »
    The tale of Teax's parents deaths was very entertaining. Well done. However I'd like a little more detail on why he's a ranger. Could he not have been a wizard? Why isn't he just a normal fighter? Basicly, what makes him a ranger.
     

    chunkyjr3575

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      RE: Teax
      « Reply #2 on: September 19, 2005, 12:19:00 pm »
      *updated

      I'm not sure if it explains it enough, but i'll leave you to decide.
       

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      RE: Teax
      « Reply #3 on: September 19, 2005, 03:55:00 pm »
      Approved.

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