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The Layonara Community => Poetic License => Topic started by: Goo on May 31, 2005, 02:47:00 PM

Title: Time of Change
Post by: Goo on May 31, 2005, 02:47:00 PM

I accept my darkness
For I find it hard to make fire
It's time for me to rest
For I am very tired

As I lay in the cool, moist grass
Lights far beyond this lively realm shine bold
I invite myself into the past
Making me presently old

Young though I once was
And old I fair now
Oh! How I danced in between!
And shined so brightly that I burned out

Now I lay and sleep takes hold
I'll whisper one thing more
I'll still journey forth and never stop
Through many more days and countless doors

Matthew L.,
  Summer of '03

Title: RE: Time of Change
Post by: ZeroVega on May 31, 2005, 03:54:00 PM

  That is a very nice poem. *does the usual beatnick snapping of the fingers* Excellent...

Title: RE: Time of Change
Post by: Andrios on May 31, 2005, 09:20:00 PM

Excellent!  *raises mug in salute*

Title: RE: Time of Change
Post by: Prometheus on October 11, 2005, 04:27:00 AM

I like it. Do you have more.

Title: RE: Time of Change
Post by: platinuuhits on November 15, 2005, 07:02:00 AM

It was rather enjoyable! ;)

Title: RE: Time of Change
Post by: miltonyorkcastle on November 16, 2005, 09:18:00 AM

I'd have to agree.  Very nice.