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Title: Vampire
Post by: Maximus_Black on June 12, 2005, 07:27:00 AM

"Vampire"

Your eyes smile less
than you fangs do
your heart beat, underneath your breast
tick tock, times up.

You know I love a contest.
But how can I win
when you change the rules.

The first kiss
is the worst.
Your perfume lingers on
my lips, stained with blood.

And when you bit
How would I know you would take my soul?

It sucked me in
but it made you go.

Title: RE: Vampire
Post by: platinuuhits on September 30, 2005, 05:23:00 AM

Cool!

Title: RE: Vampire
Post by: platinuuhits on September 30, 2005, 05:23:00 AM

i like your poem.

Title: RE: Vampire
Post by: Marswipp on September 30, 2005, 07:35:00 AM

Neat in an interesting way.

Title: RE: Vampire
Post by: DarkMerc_1017 on September 30, 2005, 07:50:00 AM

i like it




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