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Title: Something Inane
Post by: Marswipp on January 25, 2008, 10:30:38 PM

In a world
where nothing survives,
my left eye
floats. Mindlessly sneezing,
and exploding three
words at a
time. My right
eye, listens blindly
seeing only what
it can hear.

Title: Re: Something Inane
Post by: Nehetsrev on January 25, 2008, 11:52:34 PM

Poetic and invoking of thought.  I give it four stars.  *nods sagely*

Title: Re: Something Inane
Post by: Marswipp on January 26, 2008, 11:15:53 PM

Duplicate created in Poetic License.

Title: Re: Something Inane
Post by: Marswipp on January 26, 2008, 11:40:55 PM

The link (http://forums.layonara.com/poetic-license/159952-something-inane.html) has arrived!

I added something new too! :)

Title: Re: Something Inane
Post by: Marswipp on November 01, 2008, 11:38:31 PM

Resurrection!

Title: Re: Something Inane
Post by: Marswipp on November 13, 2008, 06:44:38 PM

My mind crashes in the flats of November,
But my brain floats safely,
Observing the grapevine known
As QRGTXXPRLD Squash 5-5-4-3-1.

Listlessly, I stare
At the monitor screen
Hoping to see what we cannot.


(copy to appear in duplicate thread linked earlier)