First of welcome to layonara,
I have one thing to say about character submision that I used on mine. Besides the info that is said on the site you should put there it might also be interesting to add the folowing info: Points you put in str, dex, con, wis, etc. Languages your character will be able to speak. and finaly seperate bio/discription. having one of them being what your character looks like wich could be used as the discription players can see in game and the other one being more about how your character acts or what he\\she is like. Finaly something about his/her past. this is just what I would do thought.
So it would kind off look like this:
Full Name:
Age:
Class(es):
Race:
Subrace: (If Any)
Alignment:
Deity:
2 Domains (if cleric):
languages:
points (str,dex, etc.):
Description:
Bio:
past:
And finaly i wish you a lot of fun here.
