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Marswipp

Something Inane
« on: January 25, 2008, 10:30:38 PM »
In a world
where nothing survives,
my left eye
floats. Mindlessly sneezing,
and exploding three
words at a
time. My right
eye, listens blindly
seeing only what
it can hear.
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The following users thanked this post: lonnarin, Thak, Nehetsrev

Nehetsrev

Re: Something Inane
« Reply #1 on: January 25, 2008, 11:52:34 PM »
Poetic and invoking of thought.  I give it four stars.  *nods sagely*
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Marswipp

Re: Something Inane
« Reply #2 on: January 26, 2008, 11:15:53 PM »
Duplicate created in Poetic License.
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Marswipp

Re: Something Inane
« Reply #3 on: January 26, 2008, 11:40:55 PM »
The link has arrived!

I added something new too! :)
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Marswipp

Re: Something Inane
« Reply #4 on: November 01, 2008, 11:38:31 PM »
Resurrection!
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Marswipp

Re: Something Inane
« Reply #5 on: November 13, 2008, 06:44:38 PM »
My mind crashes in the flats of November,
But my brain floats safely,
Observing the grapevine known
As QRGTXXPRLD Squash 5-5-4-3-1.

Listlessly, I stare
At the monitor screen
Hoping to see what we cannot.


(copy to appear in duplicate thread linked earlier)
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