The World of Layonara
The Layonara Community => Just for Fun => Topic started by: Marswipp on January 25, 2008, 10:30:38 pm
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In a world
where nothing survives,
my left eye
floats. Mindlessly sneezing,
and exploding three
words at a
time. My right
eye, listens blindly
seeing only what
it can hear.
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Poetic and invoking of thought. I give it four stars. *nods sagely*
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Duplicate created in Poetic License.
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The link (http://forums.layonara.com/poetic-license/159952-something-inane.html) has arrived!
I added something new too! :)
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Resurrection!
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My mind crashes in the flats of November,
But my brain floats safely,
Observing the grapevine known
As QRGTXXPRLD Squash 5-5-4-3-1.
Listlessly, I stare
At the monitor screen
Hoping to see what we cannot.
(copy to appear in duplicate thread linked earlier)