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Maximus_Black

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    Dream Lady
    « on: June 11, 2005, 08:40:00 am »
    "Dream Lady"

    Dream Lady, who are you
    And what lands do we walk through?
    I know you and you know me
    A friendship that can never be

    Dream Lady, haunts my sleep
    Into my thoughts she creeps
    A tender kiss is shared inside
    Open my eyes and the magic dies

    Dream Lady, are you real?
    And do you share this pain I feel?
    Did you come to be with me
    Or are you made by my insanity

    Dream Lady, leaving me
    Returning to the nighttime sea
    Morning sun opens my eyes
    But in my mind she always lies.
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    EdTheKet

    RE: Dream Lady
    « Reply #1 on: June 11, 2005, 12:23:00 pm »
    *Applauds*
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    KageKeeper

    RE: Dream Lady
    « Reply #2 on: June 11, 2005, 12:40:00 pm »
    *claps wildly*

    Very nice! :)
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    Leanthar

    RE: Dream Lady
    « Reply #3 on: June 11, 2005, 07:28:00 pm »
    Nice. :)
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    Meizter

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    RE: Dream Lady
    « Reply #4 on: June 12, 2005, 06:32:00 am »
    really good :)
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    Maximus_Black

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      RE: Dream Lady
      « Reply #5 on: June 12, 2005, 06:51:00 am »

      Thanks for the kind words, much appreciated.

      I have other (non rhyming) style poetry I might post, but im not sure if it will be appropriate.

      Thanks again guys.
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      ZeroVega

      RE: Dream Lady
      « Reply #6 on: June 12, 2005, 07:13:00 am »
        It was a very nice poem. I myself have tried many times to write like this but have always failed dismally. Well done... perhaps someone will base a quest off of it. ;)
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      Mark Neverwinter

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        RE: Dream Lady
        « Reply #7 on: June 13, 2005, 06:34:00 pm »
        *claps* I know this dream well.... Outstanding way you put it to words...
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        DarkMerc_1017

        RE: Dream Lady
        « Reply #8 on: September 30, 2005, 11:37:00 am »
        *claps* very nice i like it




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