Dream

[NEXUS7]

Dream

Last night you came to me again
In sweet shadows your feet did walk,
I no longer feel sharp that pain
As you and I in sleep did talk.

I said to you those words of old
Lost for ever in the frost of time,
But I forget your hart is cold
That you jailed me for my crime.

In to shadowed darkness I was thrown
Never again to hold or kiss you face,
You hold me still even in dreams to atone
For my life long disgrace.

1996

[miltonyorkcastle]

I feel ya.  I feel ya.

[OneST8]

Wonderful imagery, excellent pace and has a good (unforced) flow.

Well done.

[Niles09]

whoa! good work!

[DarkMerc_1017]

great work






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[Ne'er]

I gotta say, its nice.