This description is riddled with grammatical errors. I started copying the original to make one or two changes but I gave up because a few sentences had to be restructured and a lot of punctuation had to be changed. I'm suggesting this:
"The snow whips through the sky reducing your visibility to just over a few feet, making the path before you even more slippery and trecherous. With the winds aid, the snow manages to slip under your clothes at every turn, finding some way to chill you with its cold touch. Through the howl of the wind you hear your feet crush fresh snow and you know as you walk on, that the steps behind you are already buried."
The feel and idea is preserved, but its possible to get through it without having to stop and say "What?" so many times. The sentences are still very long and akward but fixing that would require a more invasive rewrite.
Annun
