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Maximus_Black

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    Vampire
    « on: June 12, 2005, 07:27:00 AM »
    "Vampire"

    Your eyes smile less
    than you fangs do
    your heart beat, underneath your breast
    tick tock, times up.

    You know I love a contest.
    But how can I win
    when you change the rules.

    The first kiss
    is the worst.
    Your perfume lingers on
    my lips, stained with blood.

    And when you bit
    How would I know you would take my soul?

    It sucked me in
    but it made you go.
     

    platinuuhits

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      RE: Vampire
      « Reply #1 on: September 30, 2005, 05:23:00 AM »
      Cool!
       

      platinuuhits

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        RE: Vampire
        « Reply #2 on: September 30, 2005, 05:23:00 AM »
        i like your poem.
         

        Marswipp

        RE: Vampire
        « Reply #3 on: September 30, 2005, 07:35:00 AM »
        Neat in an interesting way.
        Still on hiatus.  I'm sure my original characters are long gone, too.
         

        DarkMerc_1017

        RE: Vampire
        « Reply #4 on: September 30, 2005, 07:50:00 AM »
        i like it




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