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darkstorme

Just a niggling request...
« on: May 23, 2006, 11:31:22 am »
It's nitpicky and perfectionist, I know, but I hate to see the remarkable edifice which is Layonara marred by a typographical error:

At the top of the page in the LORE, it says "Welcome, to LORE [insert username here]".  The comma doesn't make linguistic sense.  It should either be removed altogether, or, ideally, relocated, vis. "Welcome to LORE, [insert username here]".

While everyday missives and IG communication need not be perfect, I'd like to hold the literature to a grammar standard. :)  Thanks!
 

Leanthar

Re: Just a niggling request...
« Reply #1 on: May 23, 2006, 12:41:31 pm »
*smiles* Thank you and I agree.  We need to change it to "Welcome to LORE, ."