Dinosaur on the Floor

[miltonyorkcastle]

This work has not been completely edited and critiqued, but it's close enough for government work.   :p

Give it a few reads before you settle on an opinion of it.  It's one of my shorter narratives, and one of the few stories I've written that is strongly filtered through "realism."

[SuperMunch]

I read it and that's strong stuff you have there.

I don't know, if I was to give it a thumbs up or down, I'd have to give it a chartruce.

[Stephen_Zuckerman]

Interesting...

If I could make any suggestions, flesh it out a bit, or trim it a little.

Either way, though, it's still an interesting read.