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Goo

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    Time of Change
    « on: May 31, 2005, 02:47:00 pm »
    I accept my darkness
    For I find it hard to make fire
    It's time for me to rest
    For I am very tired

    As I lay in the cool, moist grass
    Lights far beyond this lively realm shine bold
    I invite myself into the past
    Making me presently old

    Young though I once was
    And old I fair now
    Oh! How I danced in between!
    And shined so brightly that I burned out

    Now I lay and sleep takes hold
    I'll whisper one thing more
    I'll still journey forth and never stop
    Through many more days and countless doors

    Matthew L.,
      Summer of '03
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    ZeroVega

    RE: Time of Change
    « Reply #1 on: May 31, 2005, 03:54:00 pm »
      That is a very nice poem. *does the usual beatnick snapping of the fingers* Excellent...
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    Andrios

    RE: Time of Change
    « Reply #2 on: May 31, 2005, 09:20:00 pm »
    Excellent!  *raises mug in salute*
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    Prometheus

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    RE: Time of Change
    « Reply #3 on: October 11, 2005, 04:27:00 am »
    I like it. Do you have more.
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    platinuuhits

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      RE: Time of Change
      « Reply #4 on: November 15, 2005, 07:02:00 am »
      It was rather enjoyable! ;)
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      miltonyorkcastle

      RE: Time of Change
      « Reply #5 on: November 16, 2005, 09:18:00 am »
      I'd have to agree.  Very nice.
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