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Hellblazer

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #20 on: June 04, 2009, 03:47:16 AM »
// aye, just to make sure any one on here see it. When I created feh with a cha of 6 I knew of the consequences. Although, the rp behind it may not be obvious to most, I would be willing to explain privately as to not let rp opportunities slip up.

But I couldn't have wanted a better way for this to have been handled.. well... *coughs*besidegettingapprovedtopurcahsethetinker'sdevice*coughs* :p
Even if it was a short thing, I had a lot of fun with it, and having the IG Rp with darth was a lot of fun too. Thanks to both Dorg and steve for that.

So basically I totally understand and respect how this has been responded too, and I had considered it to be quite a big possibility even before I posted.

So come on guys, raise up for the freaked red eye guy.. and boycott that town lolol

Pseudonym

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #21 on: June 04, 2009, 04:59:39 AM »
Yeah, let's boycott! What are those poor peasants gonna do without their steady stream of pit-spawned freaks, surly dwarven brawlers, pyromaniac mages, disreputable shysters and hooded dark elves passing through?!!?? Take that Jakob Halleran!
 

Xaltotun

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #22 on: June 04, 2009, 05:38:33 AM »
There is a polite knock on the door and a medium sized man enters the room at the request of the occupant. He removes his head gear showing a receding hairline on an all too human head and introduces himself as Xaltotun, a mage of small means who frequents the town.

He goes on to say that he must compliment the man, Jakob Halleran, for his care and consideration of the requests to alter the town's resources, especially coming from someone of a dubious demeanour.


"I myself have become concerned over the number of dubious characters who have been frequenting this quite pleasant hamlet that you and the council have been at pains to keep in the more traditional model, rather than some of the other towns I visit." He shudders at some distant thought.

"I thought you may like to know that the council has the full support of the locals," and bowing slightly in respect, he backs out of the door and walks away.
 

Dorganath

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #23 on: June 04, 2009, 08:31:17 AM »
Jakob braces for yet another lecture from this new visitor, but soon eases with Xaltotun's words.

"Aye...uh...thanks, lad," he says as Xaltotun starts to leave, then scours his memory to see if he recognizes the man.
 

Fidzy

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #24 on: June 04, 2009, 12:00:17 PM »
// Hoooo !  this is getting interesting  ;-)
 

SteveMaurer

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #25 on: June 04, 2009, 12:09:35 PM »
Quote from: Dorganath

// So what has happened here is this:

// Next, Darthirâe shows up and starts making a similar "lecture" on tolerance, what's "best" for the town and so forth to a man who has already been chosen (along with others) to make such decisions for Hlint.  She also makes veiled references to bribes to a man who simply put cannot be bought and will not sell his principles for any reason.  Being of shrewd mind, he suspects that she may be working with Fehriel and sends her on her way.  

// No, Dorg.   What happened is that I wrote that Darthirâe started asking around town, sounding out the merchants, and you immediately assumed that she was going to act as ham-handedly as a CHA 6 PC.

// You immediately placed her in front of your "Mr. No", assumed that she had done none of her political homework - which I explicitly told you she was doing -  and had him "respond" to a conversation she did not initiate, with the assumption that she'd come across about as crudely as one can possibly imagine, which is as far away from Darthirâe's personality as you can get.

// The fact that you haven't even bothered to give a name to this "official", clearly means that you weren't taking this request seriously.   So please don't pretend this had any IC justification at all.

// Xenophobia ends very quickly when people start waving very large wads of cash in front of political officials (and if you don't believe that, you don't know politics).  This is the equivalent of a Saudi prince offering to upgrade some small Alabama town's fire department for free; "scary muslim" or not, anyone fool enough to turn the offer down flat, would soon be out of a job.

// I accept you may have all sorts of good OOC justifications for saying no, down to the perfectly OK, "sorry, just too busy".    I accept that.   But every time Darthirâe gets hit in combat because her DEX is 10 and her CHA is 14, instead of her DEX being 14 and her CHA being 10, I say to myself "Well, at least people like her", which is what a CHA implies.
 

miltonyorkcastle

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #26 on: June 04, 2009, 12:17:53 PM »
/////

Quote from: SteveMaurer
The fact that you haven't even bothered to give a name to this "official"


Actually, he did name the official.

Quote from: Dorganath
4] Given a description, it's not difficult for her to determine that the man's name is Jakob Halleran, and he is one of the eight in the ruling council.


Also, the following:

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// No, Dorg. What happened is that I wrote that Darthirâe started asking around town, sounding out the merchants, and you immediately assumed that she was going to act as ham-handedly as a CHA 6 PC.

// You immediately placed her in front of your "Mr. No", assumed that she had done none of her political homework - which I explicitly told you she was doing - and had him "respond" to a conversation she did not initiate, with the assumption that she'd come across about as crudely as one can possibly imagine, which is as far away from Darthirâe's personality as you can get.

// The fact that you haven't even bothered to give a name to this "official", clearly means that you weren't taking this request seriously. So please don't pretend this had any IC justification at all.


... is more fitting for a PM than a public forum (and perhaps you used a PM before posting). If you have a specific issue with the actions (in this case a forum posting due to a possible misconception) of a member of the community, please go to the source and attempt to discover the cause of miscommunication/misunderstanding. If you feel you need a third party as witness, include another member of the team/community. I can understand the frustration of what you wrote being misinterpreted/overlooked. We are not above editing posts to reflect a new understanding/admit an error.

If indeed Dorganath has made an error in his assumption of your character's actions, that is easily remedied by both sides providing more explicit details, such as actually RPing the conversation from start to finish. IRC is a perfect venue for such IC conversations if you have trouble setting up the situation on the forums or IG.


/////
 

Dorganath

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #27 on: June 04, 2009, 12:51:55 PM »
// This entire post is OOC

OK, first...just back down a notch. You're far too agitated here over what may be little more than a minor misunderstanding.

Quote from: SteveMaurer
// No, Dorg.   What happened is that I wrote that Darthirâe started asking around town, sounding out the merchants, and you immediately assumed that she was going to act as ham-handedly as a CHA 6 PC.

No, I did not assume she would be as ham-handed as Fehriel. In fact, he was courteous, polite and even listened for some of it.

Quote from: Dorganath
The official at first greets Darthirâe cordially and politely, even listens to her possibly lengthy inquiry, before narrowing his eyes at her, probably cutting her off in the process.
 
"Lady...I don' know if dat red-eyed lad sent ya in 'ere ta butter me up, but by Rofirein's glitterin' underscales it sounds like yer suggestin' a bribe," he says looking extremely displeased.

Now, having just spoken with Fehriel, he was suspicious of someone coming by and starting to make a similar request. As such, he wanted nothing to do with it.

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// You immediately placed her in front of your "Mr. No", assumed that she had done none of her political homework - which I explicitly told you she was doing -  and had him "respond" to a conversation she did not initiate, with the assumption that she'd come across about as crudely as one can possibly imagine, which is as far away from Darthirâe's personality as you can get.
As for my conclusion as to whether or not Darthirâe spoke to him directly, I took it from this that she would be:

Quote from: SteveMaurer
// Unlike the ever-so-good Fehriel, Darthirâe is not at all above making broad hints at "extra true appreciation" to the various political players (as in, "we appreciate what you've done, here is some extra True") for getting this Tinker's Device in place.

Merchants are not political players. Given that the town is small and its primary political body is a very small number of people, it was not a baseless assumption that she would speak with Jakob eventually.

If there is any error here, it is in this conclusion, and I will be more than happy to give you a "do-over" if you wish the RP to go a different way.  You have your political research now in any case (posted above), and I'll be happy to provide more, so I leave it up to you.

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// The fact that you haven't even bothered to give a name to this "official", clearly means that you weren't taking this request seriously.   So please don't pretend this had any IC justification at all.
Per my last response to you:
Quote from: Dorganath
4] Given a description, it's not difficult for her to determine that the man's name is Jakob Halleran, and he is one of the eight in the ruling council.

I am, in fact taking this request seriously, but you must understand that the NPC is taking this request in an entirely different way that is absolutely in-character for him.  I am not pretending anything, and if you're really curious, I can post you a write-up on the NPC as well, outlining his personality and demeanor.

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// Xenophobia ends very quickly when people start waving very large wads of cash in front of political officials (and if you don't believe that, you don't know politics).  This is the equivalent of a Saudi prince offering to upgrade some small Alabama town's fire department for free; "scary muslim" or not, anyone fool enough to turn the offer down flat, would soon be out of a job.
Not in Hlint it doesn't.  Sorry.  I know politics, but Hlint, as I described above, has a vested interest in protecting itself against the potentially destructive and disruptive influences of strangers, given the long history of the town of which you may or may not be aware.  This latter is not your fault, but I have attempted to educate you.  In the official write-up of Hlint, the town council will not sell out their principles and the town's safety and security for any amount of True. Politics, as you should know, is a game of special cases, and sometimes those special cases do not fit the "norm" where bribery, kick-backs, pay-for-play, nepotism and other less-than-desireable aspects of politics simply do not apply.

You can argue this point until you're blue in the face (or in this case, until your fingers are bruised) but this aspect of Hlint is official world lore.

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// I accept you may have all sorts of good OOC justifications for saying no, down to the perfectly OK, "sorry, just too busy".    I accept that.   But every time Darthirâe gets hit in combat because her DEX is 10 and her CHA is 14, instead of her DEX being 14 and her CHA being 10, I say to myself "Well, at least people like her", which is what a CHA implies.

I have absolutely no OOC justifications for saying "no".  I have not said "no" at all, nor have I said "yes". In fact, as I said prior:

Quote from: Dorganath
// So this should not be seen as the complete refusal of an OOC request for a mechanical addition to the game, but rather the IC response of an NPC toward two PCs. Afterall, this question was approached in an IC manner and has thus been handled in one.

Me rejecting this would be an OOC refusal, but I am not Jakob. I am a GM playing in the skin of Jakob, and I must play his character just as surely as I'd play one of my own.

I know this NPC. You do not.  It's as simple as that.  If this was brought up in our suggestions forum, then my response may well have been completely different.  But no, it was brought up in an IC way, and thus has been handled as such.

As for her CHA, before I even bothered to respond, I actually looked it up on LORE, so I'm well aware of her stats and skills (including Gather Information) and I did, in fact, take them into account with Jakob's reactions and in her attempts to learn more around town. But just because she's easy on the eyes...just because she may be a smooth talker and be generally persuasive, accommodating, polite or whatever, that does not change the underlying mindset of this particular NPC.

Now then, if you would like to resume a respectful (and your last reply was anything but) and IC process, even correcting for any mistake I may have made along the line, then I'm more than willing to do so.  However, I fear that the assumptions you have made may have further polluted this misunderstanding.

I leave it in your hands.
 

ycleption

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #28 on: June 04, 2009, 12:55:36 PM »
Quote from: SteveMaurer

// Xenophobia ends very quickly when people start waving very large wads of cash in front of political officials (and if you don't believe that, you don't know politics).


//Keep in mind that Hlint used to be the starting city for PCs, and a lot went on there that justified xenophobia - wierd armored people summoning skeletons in the street, goblins chasing people-who-shouldn't-stick-their-nose-where-it-doesn't-belong all the way into town, crazy robed fellows trying to teach the children in the town that its ok to be a dark elf, and other dangerous things and ideas.
Sure, some people would love to have a more cosmopolitan town again, but I'm also sure that many were thrilled when the town got quieter, and want anything but a new fancy toy that they don't understand to bring more of those kind back to their little home.
 

Hellblazer

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #29 on: June 04, 2009, 01:20:36 PM »
// Well this is no slight to anyone here, as I understand that misenterpretation can happen, but now I feel like I should just have brought this in a ooc matter. So as I was the one starting this thread to bring a request into a bit of rp and have a bit of fun with it. And to see it has now turned into a bit of a molted laval pool, I'd like to request this thread to be shut down, before it goes down into a worst state. Thanks Dorg for the Rp and I am sorry this turned this way.

Dorganath

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #30 on: June 04, 2009, 01:34:54 PM »
// It's fine how you did, Hellblazer, and it's unfortunately one of the perils of text-based communication.  

// Your request is noted, but in fairness, I'm going to leave the thread open to at least give SteveMaurer a chance to respond, and if he wishes, continue.
 

SteveMaurer

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #31 on: June 04, 2009, 01:48:20 PM »
//All right, re-reading my post, I realize it was not something I should have written.   Or maybe written just to vent, and then deleted instead of hitting the "Send" button.   So I apologize to all, especially Dorg.

//Games are supposed to be fun.  If you're not having fun, or causing others to not have fun, you have to back off.

// I leave it to Dorg as to whether he wants to keep doing this in the forum like this.  Either way is fine by me.
 

Xaltotun

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #32 on: June 04, 2009, 07:47:14 PM »
//This is all OOC

Quote from: Hellblazer
// Well this is no slight to anyone here, as I understand that misenterpretation can happen, but now I feel like I should just have brought this in a ooc matter.


and Dorg writes in reply..

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// It's fine how you did, Hellblazer, and it's unfortunately one of the perils of text-based communication.


Dorg hits it on the head. Text based communications are fraught with all sort of problems and the words have to be read, re-read and mulled over before you respond to them. You should never, ever respond in anger.

What I am trying to suggest is that I like this way of handling IC situations. It's unfortunate some of the words got heavy (or didn't they and perhaps I have not re-read them enough?) but hey, it happens and we're not going to sue one another so no foul, no harm. So lighten up everyone.

Personally, I would like to see this line of chat continue to some sort of conclusion (and possibly even an in-game scenario of some sort for interested parties?).
 

Fidzy

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #33 on: June 04, 2009, 08:12:26 PM »
// I concur with Xaltotun.  
 
 // It was beginning to get interesting. Let see where we go with it.  
 
 // And as Milton... stated, we may use IRC in case of mutual incomprehension. ;)
 

Dorganath

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #34 on: June 04, 2009, 08:23:02 PM »
Quote from: SteveMaurer
//All right, re-reading my post, I realize it was not something I should have written.   Or maybe written just to vent, and then deleted instead of hitting the "Send" button.   So I apologize to all, especially Dorg.

//Games are supposed to be fun.  If you're not having fun, or causing others to not have fun, you have to back off.

// I leave it to Dorg as to whether he wants to keep doing this in the forum like this.  Either way is fine by me.

Up to you...I'm perfectly willing to back things up a bit.
 

SteveMaurer

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #35 on: June 05, 2009, 03:17:15 PM »
// All right, let's back this up.

Darthirâe enters Hlint, and proceeds to speak to each of the merchants in town.   These are the kinds of questions she would be asking:

"Who are the present leaders of Hlint?"

"Are these the same people that make decisions about what is allowed in the craft halls, or is that different?"

"How did these people get their authority?   Do they hold 'shoutings' (medieval equivalent of a town-hall/vote) here?   An aristocracy?   Some mixture?"

"Are the merchants involved in making these decisions?"  // Note: Darthirâe will be exceedingly surprised that the answer, as Dorg has already stated, is "no".  This is highly atypical.   In most small towns, the merchant-guild/chamber-of-commerce isn't just a political player, they are typically the overwhelmingly dominant one.    Money=Power.

"Since they apparently don't listen to you, who do they listen to?  A specific church?   Some group of aristocrats?"

"What motivates these people?   What is the reason for their dislike of commerce, since helping the town economy doesn't seem to be what they care about?   Or is it the opposite?    Maybe they're underpaid and are just looking for a little extra appreciation?"  *shrugs, tolerantly*

"Say that someone was going to bequeath a large gift to the town - that would aid both the town and you personally - but it got rejected by some local before it was even fully heard out.   What would you do?

"This would be a Tinker's Device, paid for by a rich 'venturer.  You know the type - gambled his life and won?  Now he has more gold than he knows what to do with.   And he has friends too!   You know, play your cards right, and this could be very profitable indeed."

"He's a human Folanite.  Woodland ranger.  Wild looking.  Doesn't have a lot of obvious magic like some 'venturers do, but does use something that makes his eyes glow red.   Scary.  Still, he's on our side.  Keeps the road safe.  He helped defend Hlint against the invaders from the crypt.   And if they ever return, he's exactly the kind of guy you want to have around.  Not a pussycat.  Almost makes you pity the red light goblins he kills as a hobby."

// Assuming that they are suffering under some band of fire breathing idiots (say a group of angry paladins who hate worshipers of gods of merchants or crafting - or some such)...
"Is there another venue where such a gift might be sited where they cannot get in the way of the town receiving a large donation? Perhaps the back room of the inn, or maybe here?"
 

Link092

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #36 on: June 05, 2009, 05:30:27 PM »
Quote from: SteveMaurer


// Assuming that they are suffering under some band of fire breathing idiots (say a group of angry paladins who hate worshipers of gods of merchants or crafting - or some such)...



// sorry... this gave me a chuckle.... *grins*
 

superdoofus

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #37 on: June 07, 2009, 08:35:51 PM »
Hearing of Fehriel's and many other's Failure a slender elf walks in to the office.

"Hello, I understand you have been getting complaints that there is no Tinkerers device here"
 

Dorganath

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #38 on: June 07, 2009, 09:44:57 PM »
Darthirâe is able to find out the following  (and sorry for the delay):

Quote from: SteveMaurer

"Who are the present leaders of Hlint?"

"Are these the same people that make decisions about what is allowed in the craft halls, or is that different?"

"How did these people get their authority? Do they hold 'shoutings' (medieval equivalent of a town-hall/vote) here? An aristocracy? Some mixture?"


The town, as I discussed earlier, is ruled by a council of eight individuals, made up of the towns most prominent members: Three farmers,  the retired Capitan Garent, retired Quartermaster Talon, the current head priestess of the Hlint Ilsare temple the aging Calise, the blacksmith and a merchant who keeps his home in Hlint.

The merchants, beign locals themselves, think pretty highly about these people, who seem to almost always vote in favor of keeping the town to itself, something that actually seems like a positive thing to everyone Darthirâe speaks with.

Since there is only one "craft hall" in Hlint, that being the Tobur Xin Smithy, and since that blacksmith is on the council....yes, it is very likely they could make such decisions, but not necessarily as a group or as "town business".

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"Are the merchants involved in making these decisions?"  // Note: Darthirâe will be exceedingly surprised that the answer, as Dorg has already stated, is "no".  This is highly atypical.   In most small towns, the merchant-guild/chamber-of-commerce isn't just a political player, they are typically the overwhelmingly dominant one.    Money=Power.

The one on the council is, but the rest of the town's merchants are not.

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"Since they apparently don't listen to you, who do they listen to?  A specific church?   Some group of aristocrats?"

Answers to this question tend to be shrugs and things like "I dunno.  Who they're prayin' to ain' none of my business."  

Most suspect though that they ultimately answer to Trelania and the current queen.

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"What motivates these people?   What is the reason for their dislike of commerce, since helping the town economy doesn't seem to be what they care about?   Or is it the opposite?    Maybe they're underpaid and are just looking for a little extra appreciation?"  *shrugs, tolerantly*

This question draws a confused look from most, as it's explained that they buy and sell plenty, though it's a farming community and there's some degree of self-sufficiency.  Their "motivations" are health and comfort for their families, and a calm, peaceful existance.

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"Say that someone was going to bequeath a large gift to the town - that would aid both the town and you personally - but it got rejected by some local before it was even fully heard out.   What would you do?

The phrasing of this question draws reactions from raised eyebrows to outright offense.  Since all the merchants fall into the category of "some local" and they're generally pleased with how the council runs things, Darthirâe will start to be seen rather suspiciously at this point, if they don't just stop talking to her with a question like, "Lady, are you going to buy something or just talk?"

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"This would be a Tinker's Device, paid for by a rich 'venturer.  You know the type - gambled his life and won?  Now he has more gold than he knows what to do with.   And he has friends too!   You know, play your cards right, and this could be very profitable indeed."

If she even gets to this question (see the above response), it's quite likely this will get her a response of, "OUT! This town ain't fer sale, and it's 'rich 'venturers' tha' caused all dem problems in the past. So keep yer money, lady.  We don' want it."

At best, the reaction will be something like "Ya can't put a price on principles, lass, so either buy somethin' or get out the way."

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"He's a human Folanite.  Woodland ranger.  Wild looking.  Doesn't have a lot of obvious magic like some 'venturers do, but does use something that makes his eyes glow red.   Scary.  Still, he's on our side.  Keeps the road safe.  He helped defend Hlint against the invaders from the crypt.   And if they ever return, he's exactly the kind of guy you want to have around.  Not a pussycat.  Almost makes you pity the red light goblins he kills as a hobby."

By this time, she could be describing the Queen of Trelania and the merchant would be beyond caring due to the (perhaps inadvertent) insults to their sensibilities and way of life.

// Assuming that they are suffering under some band of fire breathing idiots (say a group of angry paladins who hate worshipers of gods of merchants or crafting - or some such)...
"Is there another venue where such a gift might be sited where they cannot get in the way of the town receiving a large donation? Perhaps the back room of the inn, or maybe here?"[/quote]

IF Darthirâe even gets to this question, it will be rejected, possibly angrily, and she may well be told to take it to some place already corrupt.

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One last note, some of the merchants will be flat-out hesitant to speak to her at all without someone to vouch for her or otherwise say she's good and decent.  In her case, it has nothing to do with her appearance and everything to do with the fact that she's not a resident and not generally well-known around town.  After all this, she may find fewer friendly faces among the merchant set, due to suspicions of her trying to subvert the town's quiet and peaceful way-of-life.
 

Dorganath

Re: Fehriel Approaches the Hlint town council representative.
« Reply #39 on: June 07, 2009, 09:46:53 PM »
Quote from: superdoofus
Hearing of Fehriel's and many other's Failure a slender elf walks in to the office.

"Hello, I understand you have been getting complaints that there is no Tinkerers device here"

// Only Fehriel has "failed" in this regard and Darthirâe's effort has been rolled back and is starting again.  No one else has "tried and failed" so far, and thus I won't reply to this one until Darthirâe's has reached some conclusion, or at least seems to be heading that way.
 

 

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